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April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude i loved it i want more
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Would've loved a bit more detail on the part where Onix was screwing the hell out of Ash but otherwise it is a great story. Can't wait for the sequel. :)
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just leaving a review to say - do the next bit!
I would hvae thought that Onix would...kill Ash,rather than just hurting him. Cause his penis would probably be wider than Ash's head.
I would hvae thought that Onix would...kill Ash,rather than just hurting him. Cause his penis would probably be wider than Ash's head.
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this story!
I am soooo curious as to what other pokemon(and their sexual ways) do to ash. I love the whole Crazy!brocK and the pathetic!ash. loveit, loveit, loveit.
goodjob fellow sicko
love--Josh
I am soooo curious as to what other pokemon(and their sexual ways) do to ash. I love the whole Crazy!brocK and the pathetic!ash. loveit, loveit, loveit.
goodjob fellow sicko
love--Josh
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay yea, i'm totally interested in reading more. i feel bad that i'm taking pleasure from ash's pain, but the good thing is that he's a fictional character. i'm definately encourageing u to write more...and possibly use toys in the next chapter (if there's gonna be one), but that's just a suggestion of course. anyway, hav a good new year ^^
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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story a lot... I would love to know what happens next. (srry i know it's not really a review but keep up the good work)
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wanna know what happens next!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear god, that might just have been one of the funniest bits of smut I've ever read. You're awesome. That thing about Onyx deciding Ash must be female was priceless. It was very OOC though, but who gaves a damn at this point? That was great. XD
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That story was certainly interesting! Yes, you're one sick puppy, but I'm sick too...write number 2!
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should seriously write the next few chapters. That was pretty amazing.