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October 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Definitely a great starting point for what could be a long and rewarding journey for young Jun. Although you haven't touched the story in a long time, I hope you come back and continue it at some point, as there aren't too many authors that do this well on their first attempt.
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August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was good there it was a tad lonely being just about the only person with stories in this section the only thing I can say to make you story better is make it longer.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
not bad, im not usual into girls doing pokemon unless their gardevoir or anthro pokegirls but this was prety good, i thought parts of it sounded familiar and then i saw that u been reading me and imasuky's work, lol, that would explain it! :D keep writing plz