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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting interesting! I look forward to next week.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wait, he is the king's son?
And I think I missed the part where Rai's wings got described, because I was like 'he has WINGS??' XD
I don't think Tomoyo is in much danger...for the time being. Am I the only one who thinks that those crystal shards ARE NOT pieces of Yue, but some sort of locator of the sort? I said it before, they remind me of his weapon shards.
Very funny part with the King's consort. Poor sword and shield, though, they are stuck with what they got for being obnoxious. Really interesting twist with Li, and now Sakura is on a second plane XD
That does not happen usually on CCS fics with Sakura and Syaoran as the main couple ;D
That's it for this week. And 150 pages already?? WOW. My hat's off to you, Capitalist, how could you write so much without the temptation of posting???
And I think I missed the part where Rai's wings got described, because I was like 'he has WINGS??' XD
I don't think Tomoyo is in much danger...for the time being. Am I the only one who thinks that those crystal shards ARE NOT pieces of Yue, but some sort of locator of the sort? I said it before, they remind me of his weapon shards.
Very funny part with the King's consort. Poor sword and shield, though, they are stuck with what they got for being obnoxious. Really interesting twist with Li, and now Sakura is on a second plane XD
That does not happen usually on CCS fics with Sakura and Syaoran as the main couple ;D
That's it for this week. And 150 pages already?? WOW. My hat's off to you, Capitalist, how could you write so much without the temptation of posting???
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. :)
I'm glad that Rai didn't hurt Tomoyo when he found her. (Darn her voice for getting her in trouble. xD)
I also loved the interactions between the doorknockers and Touya. Somebody's in denial. ;)
I can't wait for the next update, and as always keep up the good work.
I'm glad that Rai didn't hurt Tomoyo when he found her. (Darn her voice for getting her in trouble. xD)
I also loved the interactions between the doorknockers and Touya. Somebody's in denial. ;)
I can't wait for the next update, and as always keep up the good work.
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September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tomoyo and her voice getting her into trouble...
Extremely curious as to what exactly Touya dove into the brawl for that magically clicks together... could it have anything to do with Yue? 8D?? (Or I'm just looking for any excuse to drag Yue into this)
Thank you for the lovely new chapter~ can't wait for next week!
Extremely curious as to what exactly Touya dove into the brawl for that magically clicks together... could it have anything to do with Yue? 8D?? (Or I'm just looking for any excuse to drag Yue into this)
Thank you for the lovely new chapter~ can't wait for next week!
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September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, he found Tomoyo-chan. At least he didn't kill her outright, there's that I suppose. But still... Yeah, Syaoran's definitely identifying with Skywalker, ain't he? Poor boy. Nice revisit with the Junk Lady, still crabby as ever I see. And I definitely liked how you used those two crazy doorknockers(and making them Sword and Shield was cute, too.). Oh, yeah, this is gonna get a bit nasty before it gets better, I can see that a mile away! But then, if it I didn't it wouldn't be a Capitalist masterpiece! Until chapter 7, then! Laters!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That darn plot! It never goes like you want it to! *laughs* I love this!
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September 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an interesting chapter but I'm starting tom think that whoever said those were pieces of Yue were right. Also, will Yukito show up and if so would he be Yue when he's weak or his own character?
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to try my best to review you for every chapter you write from here on out even if all I really want to do is push the 'read next chapter' button.
Fairies, the little bitches. That's all I have to say on that.
I love the discussion between Kero and Syaoran at the end in which they both try to push the responsibility of telling Sakura the truth about Yue and Touya. It's as if I could see it playing out right before me. Very nicely done.
I can't wait to read the next chapter to see how the developments in this chapter help put the next set of events into action. Oh and an obligatory can't wait for Yue's appearance. The good plums in the tree must be linked to this right? :DDD
Fairies, the little bitches. That's all I have to say on that.
I love the discussion between Kero and Syaoran at the end in which they both try to push the responsibility of telling Sakura the truth about Yue and Touya. It's as if I could see it playing out right before me. Very nicely done.
I can't wait to read the next chapter to see how the developments in this chapter help put the next set of events into action. Oh and an obligatory can't wait for Yue's appearance. The good plums in the tree must be linked to this right? :DDD
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I could ever ever say that I hated you... even with a horrible cliffhanger that leaves me aching for more plot and chapters. I'm very very interested to see how this particular turn of events unfold with Syaoran's life now. And by very very interested, I really want to know... like now. 8D;;
Wait, does this mean that as son of the Storm King, he has powers? :D???
...Would the next chapter be a good one for Yue to appear in?
Oh and have I mentioned lately how much I love you?
Wait, does this mean that as son of the Storm King, he has powers? :D???
...Would the next chapter be a good one for Yue to appear in?
Oh and have I mentioned lately how much I love you?
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!!! Now, that I wasn't expecting! You are so great.