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for Return to the Labyrinth

by Capitalist

person loooplooop
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loooooooove this story more please more
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No, I most decidedly did not. I actually sort of thought he survived because of this world's version of the Shield card buffering most of the hit, not that Syaoran was the SOB's son! ("Syaoran, I am your father!" "NOOOOOO!!!" Sorry, couldn't resist...) Hopefully he'll get over th shock before too long and something else happens. God, you're good! Until chapter 6, then. Laters!
person absinthe
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, no, I didn't see it coming at all! Evil author you! Poor Li-kun, evil bastard invader is his father, hope he doesn't have to be the one to kill him in the end.

Can someone PLEASE smack Touya upside the head, denial really isn't a good look on him, it's soooo obvious he misses our pouty winged king, I think he's just miffed because he only visited him in dreams, and didn't come and ravish him in person.
person Gryffgruff
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter!

I still can't believe that Li is Rai's son. I definitely didn't see that coming. xD

Well keep up the good work and I can't wait till next Friday!!!
person Hinata's Twin
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was cruel but I'm loving it. I guess this means he has an even smaller chance of being able to be with Sakura because of Yue.
person snapelicious
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG YAY! Capitalist is back! ^^

Those damned fairies. Li should have Hoggle-sprayed 'em. Only good pixie's a dead one.
person Hinata's Twin
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*fangirl moment*OMG I'm love with this story. On a serious note. Is this going to be anywhere as long as the first one? Or maybe even longer, yeah longer's good. Will Sakura ever find out about Touya and Yue.
person Gryffgruff
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter!

I wonder if Sakura will be hurt when she finds out that Yue loves Touya, or if she will have gradually fallen for Li so that when she does find out, it won't hurt as much (or even matter). I love the re-introduction of Kero!! xD

Well, keep up the great work and I'll see the next chapter on Friday! :3
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, crap... Stupid carnivorous fairies... And would I be right in guessing that those shards that Touya's been find are, in fact, pieces of Yue? If so, ouch... Well, hopefully they'll get away before the gargoyle's come, and maybe Sakura can get to meet Spinner and Ruby(though that'll probably not go down well...). And is there any chance of Meilin making an appearance this time? Well, until chapter 5, then. Laters.
person vix111
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I missed on reading tomoyo's chapter last week, so I got to read two chapters today! yay!
Good to see she has managed to stay well all this time. Touya should have taken something useful from the castle (at least a pair of shoes!) but I guess he's so driven he *sometimes* forgets the most needed things.
Those evil fairies! Coincidentaly, I read the part where the fairy bites off the girls finger in the first labyrinth, so I actually got the joke this time around! Also, the 'big damn heroes' episode was one of the few firefly episodes that I actually saw and the phrase stuck with me. That, and I have been reading tons of TV tropes this week.
Great chapter, and yay kero is here! Hopefully, Li's next fight will come at the day (and not the middle of the night!) so kero can help.

...I hope Sakura is not very serious about her Yue infatuation. Unless you are playing with the threesome (lol! like in that other story you talked about)...but then again, you wouldn't do that to Li.

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