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for Return to the Labyrinth

by Capitalist

person Ranna
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see the expression on Sakura's face when she realizes Yue *slept with her brother.* That should be hysterical.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! im really curious to see what role the chunks of clear crystal has to play. Aww poor Sakura shes gonna be so sad when she finds out Yue loves Touya!!! And poor Li! *runs away crying*
person Absinthe
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, bad fairie, rip her wings off, I say! Poor little Syaoran, even in fantasy land he can't get a break, he loves Sakura and she's hung up in her brother's boyfriend, lol. I am so curious about those crystal shards Touya keeps falling over, are they the pieces of Yue's poor broken heart? Ha!! I have it, he collects all the bits of what he broke, puts them back toghether, and Yue returns!! *g* Seriously though, still loving this.
person cherrixwolf
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the (re-)introduction of Tomoyo in this chapter, especially with her specified role as servant to Touya. I'm interested as to how Touya and Sakura/Syaoran meet up with each other in the Labyrinth (if they do at all since it is called a labyrinth for a reason) Poor Syaoran, already suckered into leading Sakura to the most dangerous place she could possibly be because of her tears. Ahhhh~ <3

Poor Rai has such difficulties trying to take over Yue's kingdom. What a shame.
I wonder how many chapters it'll be before Yue makes his grand entrance?

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Insurance is such a hassle to deal with (even though it wasn't my fault)
person Mica
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, bless you for coming back!

I missed you and your wonderful chapters so much!
person Hinata's Twin
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay A sequel I'm glad I foundt it. I loved the first and I'm sure I'll love this one.
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least Tomoyo-chan's kept herself safe, that's good. And Touya, he's gonna get himself into some pretty decent trouble before he catches back up, if he ever does, to Sakura and Syaoran. And now the only previous charcters still unaccounted for, not counting Yue, who' still sulking somewhere, are Ruby, Spinner, and Kero. I look forward to what happens next(big barbecue buffet with Gargoyle as the main course?). Laters.
person Gryffgruff
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was another excellent chapter!

We finally got to see what happened to Tomoyo, and I can't wait till Touya and Yue meet again. :)

I can't wait for your next chapter on Friday! I'm looking forward to it. xD
person Ranna
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually was epecting something of the sort when he took Touya to his room. When will Yue show up? I want a reunion.
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwww!!! No Rai/ Touya slash!!oh well. I thinks it was so cute when Syaoran agrees to take sakura to the castle even though he doesn't have to take orders from her. It's so funny how clueless Sakura is! It nice to see tomoyo in the story it was interesting to see how she hid herself for 5 years!!!
can't wait for next friday!

*silvergirlrox*

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