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Oh, please don't say we're going to have to wait for Touya to admit he loves Yue before he'll turn up, that could be ages away! lol. And ew, no, Rai can't have Touya, he does belong to Yue, whether he'll admit it or not, someone should take his hands off if he tries to touch Touya again *coughYuecough*. Next Friday is sooooo far away *mopes*

-ahh oh no where's Yue?!- ha, so good to see you back ^-^

I think it is utterly amazing how you get so many reviews and ratings in such a little span of time. May I ask, how did you come about this supernatural power?

Forgive me for being one to interrogate, but I've been wanting to know for quite a while: do you still have an account on FF. net? If so, please send me the link, I just want to check it out.

Also, I feel compelled to comment on the grammar, as I do with every review I submit to any fan fiction archive. There are no spelling mistakes, as I'm sure you would not post without correction. But I feel that some paragraphs need to be broken down into smaller ones, and some of the sentences are...not really run-ons, but a little fast and could use a comma or two. As for some others, they could be worded differently.

I'm OCD too. You wouldn't know from my work on this site, since it's crappy and mediocre. I have not posted anything in quite a while, but I obsessively edit my work, from beginning to end.

By the way, I was too lazy to log in. If you find time in your day to reply, please do so at Vareyka@aol.com.

Happy Writing.

Hey there Capitalist! Good to have a great author back, even if she does leave her readers at "evil ciffhangers"! I'm very interested to see where you go with this sequel. Why do i have the feeling that this Storm King and Yue are gonna fight, if not for Touya's love than, how should I put it? Sexual gratification? Awkward choice of words!>.< Please don't keep us waiting long for the next chapter!

*Silvergirlrox*

and here I thought Touya would be less...dense, for the lack of a better word, over his relationship with Yue. He even said he loved him a long-time ago. And then he goes all "Yue doesn't deserve my worry"
Way to be sympathetic, Kinomoto XO

Well, at least now that he is gone, Li can have his 'Big Damn Hero' moments with Sakura. It seems Yue is not so far away, though, if that crystal rock Touya picked up was any hint. I do wonder if Yue is actually going to save him, or send someone else to do the job...?
Perhaps the Storm King is someone we already know...XD

YAY! for more CCS characters!! ^__^
BTW, I'm loving Li calling Touya by his name, rather than just 'Kinomoto'. It sounds weird coming from him, but cool nonetheless.

I loved this chapter! But, I now understand why people dislike cliffhangers! xD

I can't wait to see the next chapter!

I've got so many questions like what the importance of the shard of clear quartz is,and what's going to happen to Touya now that he's been kidnapped?

And what will Yue do when he finds out that Touya has been kidnapped? xD

OMG YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!! askjdf;jaks;ldfj What a GLORIOUS day!
You have no idea how crappy of a week I've been having what with a car accident and whatnot, but who cares! You're back~!!!
I'm extremely curious to see what significance the stone that Touya picked up will have.
Have I mentioned how extremely elated I am to know that you're back?

Touya just doesn't have any luck in this place, does he? Oh, well. At least now he can't get between Syaoran and Sakura! Hehehe... It also sounds like next chapter we get to finally meet this Rai character. Well, until then. Laters.

I really want to know what happens to Yue and Touya. Thay just have to get together again. Please, I will love you forever and give you cookies!

*gulp* you can't leave us until next week (whimper). This is brill, looking forward to more. (And BTW, thank you for posting the heads up on the Lj)