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for Return to the Labyrinth

by Capitalist

person ayachan
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, finally done! I ended up re-reading all of your other stories beforehand O_O Anyway, why are the girls in here so smart? I mean... I makes sense considering it's Sakura, Tomoyo, and Kaho... so I guess the real question is why won't the boys listen to them >_> Sheesh, telling them what to do and they won't do it, lol. Ohhh, I wonder what Touya's choice will be when he wakes up in the morning! He better do the smart thing and accidentally blurt out to Yue, "Just kidding, I totally love you and would love to live with you forever and ever!"... even though he would sound like Sakura then :P Can't wait for the next chapter! I hope there's some lovin' there XD

BTW, from your A/N in Ch. 3 or so. OMG, IS FIREFLY NOT THE BEST SERIES EVER?!?!?! Did you just watch it recently or did you actually see it when it first came out? Anyway, FIREFLY = AWESOME. I'm so unbelievably happy that one of my favorite authors likes the same show that I do, lol
person ayachan
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I JUST FOUND OUT THAT YOU'VE WRITTEN A SEQUEL TO THE LABYRINTH. I feel slightly silly now, lol. Anyway, an actual update after I pretty much stay up all night reading, lol. :)
person Fluffers
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been a fan of yours since I discovered Pleasure Slave a few years back (around the 2nd chapter or so!) and I don't believe I have ever left a review; neither here nor on FF.net =(
Despite that, I think your work is amazing and I can't wait to see more of it. I am really looking forward to seeing some original stories in the future too ^.^

The Labyrinth has always been one of my favourite movies and you've mixed the CCS world into it perfectly. I'm completely hooked on Touya/Yue pairings now, can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
person cherrixwolf
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This most certainly proved itself to be the best break from organic chemistry studying ever, all 23 pages of it. Eagerly waiting to read about the morning after!

Poor Touya must have felt like the world was against with his sister pushing him towards Yue, making Touya look like the villan and with even Syaoran saying Yue wasn't that bad.

(On another note, Syaoran and his four sisters. That will most certainly be a fun meeting to read)
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, we only waited for three weeks for chapter 17, that's arguably nothing compared to some of the waits we had to endure for "Pleasure Slave". Yeah, lot of resolutions, and not all of them complete. Will Touya change his mind? Will Syaoran go to his father's kingdom? We he finally get to deflower Sakura beforehand?(oh please, oh please, oh please!) Will Meilin ever make an appearance?(I'm guessing not...:() Well, until next week(we're watching you!) then. Laters.
person absinthe
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is a lovely chapter. I can't wait to see which one of them wakes up first, and if they run or stay and talk.
person Hinata's Twin
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My poor Sakura, Touya's trying to tell her who she deos an deosnt like, I think she oughta stomp on his foot XD. Still great chapter as always. Its a race agaisnt time, will you win Madame Capitalist.
person Ranna
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You updated! You really like this particular conflict, you used something similar in Pleasure Slave. I'm all edgy now.
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And quite the action packed climax it was, too! Guess Rai had a soft spot after all, just couldn't let his child die. And Syaoran discovering his own ability to throw lightning, very cool. And I definitely liked Sakura getting all tough like that, good for her! And I really liked the whole city rallying to her and Syaoran's side, yay for them! It was also nice to see Touya and Tomoyo both reunited with Sakura, and Yue finally doing something instead of just sitting on the side lines like a little wuss. Yeah, Rai got himself a righteous smackdown, kind of... Well, here's hoping the muse gets back with you in time for next Friday. Laters.
person Ranna
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeehah! Yue wins, you bitch Rai! *dances in a giddy circle, then falls down exhausted* Yes!

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