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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was awesome *fawning like a fan girl*So Li is coming into his powers. Well isn't that lovely. And Sakura is getting better at that flying thing, also I'm glad you didn't kill Syaoran that would've broke my heart. Poor Rai he's so stupid sometimes he doesn't pay attention. Tomoyo's so torn between who she should side with she's probably only taking the Labyrinth's side because she's sworn to be Sakura's servant.
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November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*tense whimper* This just gets better and better. Please Please be able to get the next chappie up next Friday!
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November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow ♥
I am in sheer awe of how amazing and epic this chapter was. All of the protagonists are finally in the same scene in the same chapter! This chapter had an amazing flow to it starting with Sakura's determination to save Syaoran to Yue's arrival and finally to the battle scene.
While Sakura's still learning to control her wings, Syaoran now has thunder power? (...i just imagined Syaoran wearing a pikachu costume haha XD) I wonder how he'll use his power, when he knows how to control it anyway. And poor Tomoyo D: At least Rai's not dead... for now. I'm sure Syaoran will be devising the best way to commit patricide.
Kero's back with even Ruby Moon and Suppi cameos! And now that Rai's out of the way, the lovely tension between Yue and Touya is sure to return~ Though I'm sure Syaoran (once healed) would have a few things he'd like to say to Yue as well. But the Touya and Syaoran interaction in this chapter was a great addition naturally including Touya's death threats. Which leads into a potential scene of Touya having a talk with his sister that's bound to be explosive and loud.
Have I mentioned how amazing this chapter was? ♥ And you're even more amazing for writing it ♥ ♥ ♥ Best of luck beating writer's block!! (YOU CAN DO IT!!! ♥♥♥ ...but no pressure :D)
I am in sheer awe of how amazing and epic this chapter was. All of the protagonists are finally in the same scene in the same chapter! This chapter had an amazing flow to it starting with Sakura's determination to save Syaoran to Yue's arrival and finally to the battle scene.
While Sakura's still learning to control her wings, Syaoran now has thunder power? (...i just imagined Syaoran wearing a pikachu costume haha XD) I wonder how he'll use his power, when he knows how to control it anyway. And poor Tomoyo D: At least Rai's not dead... for now. I'm sure Syaoran will be devising the best way to commit patricide.
Kero's back with even Ruby Moon and Suppi cameos! And now that Rai's out of the way, the lovely tension between Yue and Touya is sure to return~ Though I'm sure Syaoran (once healed) would have a few things he'd like to say to Yue as well. But the Touya and Syaoran interaction in this chapter was a great addition naturally including Touya's death threats. Which leads into a potential scene of Touya having a talk with his sister that's bound to be explosive and loud.
Have I mentioned how amazing this chapter was? ♥ And you're even more amazing for writing it ♥ ♥ ♥ Best of luck beating writer's block!! (YOU CAN DO IT!!! ♥♥♥ ...but no pressure :D)
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So much love for last chapter. Especially the title :3
I mean, that magnificent bastard was manipulating him from the start, and we are not surprised at that, but at how he acted all lovingly. And we can believe it, because its true. Seems like this Yue did learn how to tell half-trues from Clow.
Oh, the two of them, it was just too good.
And the ending, gosh, Touya really did hit a nail with Li there. And Yue is going to realize it XDD
I have very few words to feed the muse this time, but I hope it helps enough so we get the next chap on friday :P
I mean, that magnificent bastard was manipulating him from the start, and we are not surprised at that, but at how he acted all lovingly. And we can believe it, because its true. Seems like this Yue did learn how to tell half-trues from Clow.
Oh, the two of them, it was just too good.
And the ending, gosh, Touya really did hit a nail with Li there. And Yue is going to realize it XDD
I have very few words to feed the muse this time, but I hope it helps enough so we get the next chap on friday :P
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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had not thought you would have posted another story after 'Pleasure Slave' which took you at least 3 years to complete...seems like I thought wrong. While this is a pleasant surprise, 'Labyrinth' and 'Return to the Labyrinth' seems to pale in comparison to 'Pleasure slave' in certain areas. The change in the character of Yue is better in this series and make him seem more alluring, however, the sexual tension in this series cannot compared to that in you first story. Maybe it's because 'Pleasure slave' was the first to come out. but what surprises me most is that you actually finished 'Labyrinth' within a year even if the ending left me feeling quite unsatisfied, it did not feel like an ending and I would have been sorely disappointed if you had left it there. Its continuation is quite satisfying but I do hope that you would continue updating it regularly. It is a well-written story.
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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of all chapters to NOT read as soon as it came out.
I knew something was up with Yue. He was a little too innocent in the beginning to be the same Yue from The Labyrinth. And Touya's being smart for once, seeing through all of Yue's ultimatums. Now the only reason I'm not freaking out about Syaoran is because I know you won't kill him... right?
I knew something was up with Yue. He was a little too innocent in the beginning to be the same Yue from The Labyrinth. And Touya's being smart for once, seeing through all of Yue's ultimatums. Now the only reason I'm not freaking out about Syaoran is because I know you won't kill him... right?
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear god, Touya's got guts, our little Peach Blossom better know what he's doing. As for Yue, I would really hate him (and you) if he doesnt help Li. And poor Sakura she's alone at the expense of Yue's sick perversions and Touya's stubborn need for independence. They need to get their priorities straight and help the poor girl. But ofcourse this chapter was wonderful just the one before and the one before that and the one before that and the one befo....
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that manipulative bastard! Touya's right, he didn't learn a thing! Some people just can't be taught, I suppose. But it feels like we're winding down to a finish, sadly. Oh, well, all good things and all that, right? Well, until next chapter, then. Laters!
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, Touya and Yue're perfect for each other... THEY'RE BOTH FRICKEN EVIL!
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are pure evil. *shakes her head in admiration* Just when I thought it would turn out one way...bam! You go and change it up on me. How sneaky of you!