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Waaaiii! Where was Touya-kun????? Ooooh, like the way you snuck Eriol in there, and Kaho is SO a peacock, so full of herself. (Sorry, will never quite forgive her for whatever relationship she had with UNDERAGE Touya in CCS.) Bites nails and contemplates trying to create TARDIS to move next Friday forward to NOW.

Ahhh and there's the catch. It was far too easy for Rai to just give Syaoran his mother's pendant and want nothing in return... Sneaky Rai! I would definitely hate to be Tomoyo right then and there... and perhaps a little earlier when her innocence was kinda stolen from her. Not looking forward to Rai's reaction next chapter...

Eriol and Kaho ♥ It was so exciting to see them! (Even if Kaho happened to be a peacock) I love how you integrated Eriol into the story without taking away all of the Syaoran teasing~ Loved the rock at the end that Eriol avoided xD I definitely hope Eriol shows up again in the story (perhaps there was some foreshadowing with the Sakura can find her way back thing??? :OOO)

Still no sign of Yue... Oh where might he be~? (Touya was also absent from this chapter. Perhaps they did something together without the author knowing? 8D)

Ew writer's block. That's horribly unpleasant. You could always try to incorporate another Clow Card. By the anime count, there are 53 cards~? Can't wait for the next chapter! (Oh and around what time do you update out of curiosity? :D?)

ERIOL!!! Yayness! I love how you included him. And Rai was so excited and enthusiastic, only to have his hopes crushed. Oh well.

Ohhhh Syaoran. Poor poor Syaoran. What have you done now?

I really love how you brought back the worms and made one of them tell Sakura about the widely known truth. ♥ Poor Sakura though. But it's okay because she sees that her brother does have someone after all... despite the fact that no one knows where the lovely king has gone. Can't do too well for a relationship (but neither was kidnapping someone's sister yet where did that land us? The beautiful world of The Labyrinth 8D)

Kero, you're too cruel to just leave Syaoran like that XD

Favorite line in this chapter had to be "Oh yeah. A woman in the city gave me this, when I kicked a goblin off her baby. She calls it, um, soap." I can just imagine Syaoran saying this particular line in his head all awkwardly in a nonchalant fashion. As if kicking goblins off babies were normal XD ♥♥♥

I'm so freaking behind o.O I've clicked so many next chapter buttons! (it's going to kill me when I don't see that button for the most recently updated chapter)

Yue and Syaoran's dad eh? XD Omg I can't even imagine what Syaoran's reaction to that would be lmao He's already got enough on his plate without knowing what Yue and his dad were up to oh so many years ago XD

And it looks like Touya's just a tiny bit jealousss~ 8D Yes yes? And Kero's not helpful to Touya's prying at all haha

Despite the lack of the missing Yue, the past Yue was fun to see :D Especially with his condescending manner to Rai and such. Stalking Touya when he learned to play the piano? Oh Yue~

Oh look! A next chapter button 8D ♥♥♥♥

NOOOOOOOO!!!!! I'VE RUN OUT OF NEXT CHAPTER BUTTONS ToT

Dash~ ♥ Another Clow card fave :D Touya's trinket collecting seems very important to the plot all around somehow~ I just can't help but wonder what exactly it'll be? Maybe it'll have to do something with Yue? Yes? :D?

Syaoran and his dad's conversation was adorable. I loved Syaoran blushing about Rai's comment about powerful grandchildren XD Classic CCS!Syaoran ♥ Rai's reaction to his conversation with Syaoran was kind of cute... until he decided to use Tomoyo for certain things...
I wonder how long it'll take Rai to realize that his son, as marvelous as he is, is also a liar? That won't be a very fun revelation, at least not on Syaoran and Sakura's parts.

And where in the world is Yue?

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Have I mentioned lately that I love you? Because I do ♥
I shall be ever so impatiently wait for your next update :D

...prepared to win what precisely? Does he plan on eliminating Yue once and for all (which is impossible since Yue must live to make his appearance and claim Touya as his again naturally) or does it have to do with Syaoran? :O Exciting stuff~

I loveeee the interactions between Syaoran and Kero-chan. The way their conversation just continually bounces off one each other from the smirks and giggles to the glares~ and Sakura, the poor child, so helplessly naive (though she wouldn't be Sakura if she weren't) still convinced that Yue will make her his queen. That bubble's just waiting to burst...

Also, I definitely enjoyed the way you started this chapter with the noises intertwined in the dream. The dream reminded me a lot of the "Leave it to Kero" extra from the second CCS movie with the tea. Minus Suppi and the takoyaki of course.

Okay, next chapter button! ♥

I had to stop myself from literally laughing out loud when I read Kero's "It looked like you were ready to start making babies" line XD

Lovely to see what Touya's up to. A little run in with Ruby and Suppi in which he reveals that he does really want to know where Yue is. For what reason... could still be one of many.

Jump!! Such a cute little creature~ Really adorable. But why do I get that somewhat sinking feeling that Syaoran not specifying what the reward was will get him into trouble in the future?

Off to the next chapter! ♥

Ohno poor Tomoyo's going to lose her innocence this is horrible. That should be saved for the man she loves, given to some pompous bastard of a king who thinks he deserves it. I'm going to find a blowtorch to dipose of him.

I like Dash! Kawaii! I can't wait until Yue appears. I want him to fuck. Touya. Into. The. Ground. And I want it to be good, and smutty, and I want Touya to say "I missed you."