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for Return to the Labyrinth

by Capitalist

schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good for him, he's turning Rai down! And alas poor Tomoyo-chan, raped of her virtue! You evil fiend! Ah well, at least we didn't have to actually "watch" it. And naughty, naughty Dash! Taking other peoples sparklies. Oh, well, at least Touya got it back, with interest! Now, if he could just get the things all in one piece so we can find out what exactly they are. Ooh, this is getting tense! I eagerly await the next chapter! Until then, laters!
person Absinthe
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, *on tenterhooks*. Everything seems to be picking up speed a little, YAY.
person Ranna
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why do people get so jealous over who someone dated before they even knew them? It doesn't make sense to me. But I like the plot twist.
person Absinthe
schedule October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I don't care what Touya said, his eyes were green there, very, very green. Hee!
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a few Yue laden flashbacks to appease the raving fangirls, yes? Well, that aside, fascinating development, certainly didn't see that little revelation coming. And while not quite the reaction I was expecting, okay, I'm not sure what I was expecting really, but anyway it's nice that Sakura now knows the full truth. And Kero again brings much comic relief, and gets to needle Touya while he's at it! Hehheh... Well, until next time, then(Meilin, Meilin, Meilin, Meilin, Meilin). Laters.
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!!! Yes i agree.. Yue is a naughty boy! It breaks my heart to see Li so sad. Touya was so jealous!!!!!! when is he going to realize that there's no point in denying it? Sheesh...

I can't believe Rai was one of Yue's lovers!!! Very surprising indeed. hhmmmm... the plot thickens...Can't wait for next week!!!

*silvergirlrox*
person bossy_foodshield
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay another chapter!! wow the plot's getting more and more interesting, especially with the past relationship between yue and rai... keep it up! i'm excited to find out what happens next!
person Hinata's Twin
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp* With Rai?! I'm totally thrown off now. I don't know what to think about Yue anymore. Poor Kero, Touya whacked him hard. And as for Syaoran, I think Sakura is unintentionally being cold to him.
person bossy_foodshield
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad you continued the story.. i can't wait to see what happens next!! please keep it up!
schedule September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gosh im such a horrible person!!! i haven't reviewed in like 4 weeks! well at least i got to read 4 shapters in a row. Awww poor Sakura. and poor Li. Sheesh you just won't give him a break will you? I was very excited to learn that the pieces of crystal fit together like a puzzle... and i certainly did not see Rai being Li's father coming!>.< Yue is such a sadistic bastard. BUT... a very SEXY sadistic bastard! no one can take that away from him!!!!can't wait for this friday to see Sakura's reaction to Li's accidental confession.

*silvergirlrox*

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