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for Return to the Labyrinth

by Capitalist

person Hinat's Twin
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I should have you killed. My poor Syaoran. My Syaoran? Where'd that come from? Anyway It's coming out great, and Kero0-chan is evil for leaving them. I think he knows what Syaoran did and doesnt want to be there when Yue kills him.
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Of all the ways to learn the truth, it had to be this one! Hopefully she'll get over it before too long, though lord knows how she'll react when and if she finally learns the truth about what Syaoran's "reward" would have been for betraying Touya...who didn't actually appear this chapter, now I think about it. Also, I would like to thank you for not having Rai rape Tomoyo-chan, I was worried he might when he caught her effectively in the buff. I note also that Kero is a coward, and liked the touch that Rai noticed that Labyrinth is starting to revive, though isn't aware that it's Sakura doing it. Well, here's hoping next time things improve for our heroes a bit. Until then. Laters!
person Absinthe
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, Sakura gave away their position playing with the magic, what a bubble brain! Sad that she got her heart broken by an inchworm though, lol. Can't wait for the next bit, I want to know if she slaps Li, kisses him back, pretends it didn't happen, or does a runner.
person Ranna
schedule September 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Yes! Yes! Haha! Yes, Yue doesn't love you, Sakura-chan, he loves Touya! Bwahahahaha! *cough* Sorry, feeling a bit vindictive today.
person Hinata's Twin
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are so crule to Syaoran, I mean seriously. That's just plain mean making him snap like that.
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How long, indeed?! Personally, I kinda hope he does eventually tell her that she was the intended reward, just to see her face! And now he knows "daddy" wants him back, oy... Nice to see Ruby and Spinner again, if albeit briefly, and liked the inclusion of Jump, poor guy. Oh, well, until the next time then(Meilin, Meilin, Meilin). Laters!
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah, just remembered, I lost my bet(I thought Kero was gonna tell her the truth first, not Syaoran). Oh well, so much for that sum...
person Ranna
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, I thought he was gonna tell her Yue fucked her brother. I really wanna see that.
person T. Y. Kura
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^-^ I was so happy to realize what day it is.
Poor unlucky Touya lol, poor Li!
At least Touya found another one of those crystal shards, but just how many of those things are there anyway?? ^-^ I look forward to the next chapter, and Yue's return of course!
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, and here I figured he was making a potion to force down Syaoran's throat. I suppose an enchanted pendant works, too. Hehehehehe, I think someone's getting close to the breaking point! Personally, I'm putting my money on Kero telling Sakura the truth first, though whether or not she'll ever learn about Yue's attempted deal with Syaoran back in L1 remains to be seen as only Syaoran can tell her about that(Touya can tell her about the truth, but I don't think he ever knew about the actual deal that went with it). Well, until chapter 8, then. Laters.

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