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October 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Like so many interesting stories I've found on here, I can't fathom as to why this one was abandoned.
The only fault I've found was in the formatting of it, as it is oddly spaced and has question mars all over the place.
I'd really like to see this one completed.
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
holy crap, this is an awesome story.
It is no small feat to be able to blend the erotic and the mindfuck, and yet you have. I enjoyed reading this, and I'm hoping for another chapter sometime in the near future!
It is no small feat to be able to blend the erotic and the mindfuck, and yet you have. I enjoyed reading this, and I'm hoping for another chapter sometime in the near future!
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I personally think this to be one of the best done Eva lemons ever. It's very impressive how rather than ignore or gloss over the charcters psychological issues to clear the way for sex scenes, you instead incorperate them, and make them the heart of the lemon. This is a truly great read, and I do hope you will continue it.
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December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i dunno so far shinji hasn't actually raped anybody so whats so bad about his experience and what will happen between him and asuka and him and rei?
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More. Moooore. This is one great story, great plot, accurate depiction of the character's personality's. Not to mention the classic Rei Shinji / Asuka Shinji action. More Chapter's, More review's. As for constructive critisism, I've none to give. I've yet (yet being a relative term as I don't expect) to find anything wrong with your story. Anywayz, MORE!! I love it, love it, I want some more of it. ;D LOL
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. The shifting between the different situations is done really well. I hope you continue to expand on this story for it has great potential.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've got a great thing going here. The psychological way you threw scenes together was a little bothersome at first but it plays well with what Leliel is doing.
I'm curious about what happens next so I hope to see a new chapter soon.
Read ya Later.
I'm curious about what happens next so I hope to see a new chapter soon.
Read ya Later.
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. The rape aspect worried me but you pulled it off tastefully.
Also your use of tense is strange. I got beat up in reviews for using present tense, so I switched to past tense to please the readers.
Great story.
Lord Saturn
Also your use of tense is strange. I got beat up in reviews for using present tense, so I switched to past tense to please the readers.
Great story.
Lord Saturn
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, i am very impresssed with this story. It is unusual to find something on this site beyond mindless smut or WAFFy bullcrap. There is real emotional content in this story, real character depth. I truly belive that you have managed to capture the mindset of all those involved, and your use of wroding and diction is simply amazing. I await with batyed breath for the next installment of this story, and hope you are able to keep up the quality of the work that you have done so far.
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August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Very descriptive action, and I really like the way you started at the ending.