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for First to Feel Like This

by alphabravo

schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness... I love you for this, and that's all I can say.
It was so lovely, smooth and musical and reaching new heights of emotion, of tenderness, of sensuality. I love how natural it felt, not forced like much of the TamaKyou fics I've read in the past. Everything about this lovely snippet was just... right.

Thank you for brightening my day like this. Reading a story that is written so delicately is a beautiful experience, and I'm glad I got the chance.
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schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing style so much XD The music, the soft light, the gentle bubbling of the tank and the soft sounds of their breathing are still lingering with me *ahhh* You are a fantastic writer! Thanks so much for putting your work up for us to admire. I loved the way you explained Tamaki's decision. The whole thing was just so sweet, so desperately honest and so sexy...
schedule October 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really sweet story, I liked it immensely. I'm not a huge fan of oneshots, but this was good. Thank you.

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