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by alphabravo

person Sharpeslass
schedule June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is probably the best Kyou/Tama I have ever read. I think I've been searching for this fic, or one like it, for nearly six fruitless years. In this fandom, there is so very little erotica written by folks old enough to have actually had sex themselves.
Elegant, romantic and terribly, terribly hot. I'm so glad I found this.
person Angel
schedule December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know you wrote this some time ago so I don't expect an answer. Funny how the stories we write live beyond us, like children who grow up and leave home. Anyway...just a note to say thank you for your talent. Y'know...the one thing that kept swirling through my mind as I read this wasn't the sex (which was well-written - props on that), but just, I guess what matters most in any relationship..trust. Trust is the source of all love. Thanks for the reminder. Peace.
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was definitely one of the best OHSHC stories i've read. it was very well written, and written with such detail that a lot of writers leave out. and i do like how it was written in three chapters, although it would have still been fantastic as just a one or two-shot, i liked how you went the extra mile with their relationship.
person Synvamp
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you write these two - so good XD So sweet and well written, great descriptions and so HOT. Tamaki's thoughts on Kyouya's state of mind, Kyouya's responses - and his comments! So IC - this story is just love!!!
schedule March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely fantastic. I love this pairing so, so much, and you've done it the justice is deserves. Amazing.
person Uroki
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Your skill in description, is unflawed. You pull off present tense better than I've ever seen and you never switch tenses. Well done. Well done indeed.
person idream
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it verry sensual
person Iarejedi
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. :D It was hot. The characters were perfectly written. I loved the casual interplay between them at the end as well as the awkward learning it took for them to get to that point. I think you did an awesome job with these two guys. :D You certainly should write more about them.
person 7mizu8
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. I loved the all the detail, how slow and indepth all of it was.
Beautifully done. A wonderful story.
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh, i love this story, i imagine Kyouya and Tamaki to be just like that, really!

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