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This is getting interesting but you really need to work on your format... Check it out yourself and you'll see what I mean. ;)

I hope there'll be plenty of hot, kinky sex between Ash and Dawn or Ash & May :) Perhaps both! :D

I should've known! It's been a year since this story recieved some love. That's such a shame :)

Just read the fourth page. I'm really enjoying it. I didn't keep up with the series after the third season, but I love the way the characters have developed. I don't know when this story was posted, but I hope it hasn't been abandoned. I'm Excited about it :)

Hmm. I remember reading this story from somewhere.

Anyway, the story is going great and although many questions are left unanswered, this story is pretty flawless so far. I feel some Brock/May moments here, but as long as it's set-up properly, I don't mind.

Hope to see you soon.

Hey, good to see a new face in the review section. I was wondering when this tale would receive an update.

I so called it! Ash Ketchum here to save the day! :D /gloat

Anyway, good read, keep up the goodness ;D

It's me, your beloved author.

Chapter Six is almost complete. I've just had the hardest time in sitting down to do it lately. College has started and I'm in a very, very competitive Animation program and I'm swamped with work and my hands are always cramped from drawing.

Good news is that I have found a beta-reader. The Prologue and Chapter One have been beta-read; I have to complete editing them before sending the rest of the chapters her way. I may update the existing chapters with edited ones and I may not; they're just small changes.

Please stick around, guys. I know that going from an update a day to nothing in over a week is like "O.O" but I just have not had an opportunity to properly write yet. Hopefully I will next weekend.

-Didi

update soon

I like where this story is heading, please update again soon!

I actually shift perspectives a lot in my own fic (it's here on AFF, check it out if you find the time). It basically shifts from Ash and friends in one chapter to Team Rocket in the next, going mostly back and forth until the two groups meet up. Nothing wrong with that.

And I tell ya, those 400+ hits aren't all from me... you've got readers out there, but they won't review! I have the same exact problem. Swhy I make it a point to review the stories I read. Not only is it just plain courteous to do so, but spending time on a piece of writing and submitting it for everyone's reading pleasure only to have no one comment on it is a real downer. Granted, one should write because one likes writing, and not because he or she gets lots of hits or reviews. But seeing that someone cares enough to tell you what they like or didn't like about your story feels good. :)

I enabled the ability to leave anonymous reviews on my story. That way, even people who aren't members (or too lazy to log in) can post comments. Most people leave some sort of name, so it's not all that bad...

But I digress.

I have no problems with any rating stepping-upping due to future content. I mean, this is adultfanfiction.net, home of adult literature. I come here expecting to find this kind of stuff. You don't exactly need fair warning, but hey, it's all good. I'll read anything as long as it's written well (proper use of capitalization, punctuation, grammar, etc.).

Four thousand words isn't a lot, not by any stretch. If you check out my fic, you'll find that most of my chapters are more than double that amount. Really, the only way you should feel that you need to split your chapters is if you're nearing the 20,000 word mark and you still haven't hit your chapter's end yet :P

But hey, whatever works for you. I'm still gonna read it.

It's kinda cool, in a way, being the only person to review this story ._.

Action-packed, indeed! Surely Dawn's gotta have some trick up her sleeve. Er, skirt. Whatever. ;o I knew those guides were bad news.

Good stuff... good stuff.