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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, LOVE!!
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I hadn't realized I was reading an incomplete fic. It looks like you've been working on it very recently though so I await future chapters XD
It looks good so far.
I don't know if anyone's pointed it out yet but the thing's a haramaki, not a harakami. They're usually just a stretchy fabric tube that you wear under your clothes to keep warm, but Zoro wears it on top 'cause he's weird like that.
I like stories where Luffy's actually really smart but just never acts it.. XD
Anyway, nice job ^_^ More please.
It looks good so far.
I don't know if anyone's pointed it out yet but the thing's a haramaki, not a harakami. They're usually just a stretchy fabric tube that you wear under your clothes to keep warm, but Zoro wears it on top 'cause he's weird like that.
I like stories where Luffy's actually really smart but just never acts it.. XD
Anyway, nice job ^_^ More please.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. It's well written and really reflects the various characters of Luffy's Crew. I liked the most recent chapter because we got stuff from other people's perspective and Luffy was cute. I can't wait till those two stubborn heads figure out that they really really like each other. I look forward to future updates! You keep everyone very IC
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this was hot! I love an assertive dommy Zoro. Very primal. Nice job.
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmm~ Nummy nummy I lurve it and I'm glad you updated it
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOTNESS...Oh yes..very nice!
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October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GUUUUUUUUH!!!!
Zoro rocks, and you totally show that, and Sanji drooling over him is one of my favorites! Thanks sooooooo much for the update, dearest! I adooooooooore it!!!!
Zoro rocks, and you totally show that, and Sanji drooling over him is one of my favorites! Thanks sooooooo much for the update, dearest! I adooooooooore it!!!!
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I really like how this chapter has a little sex and a little violence! Very exciting twists of the action scene! yay!
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this is totally awesome. I love your story, and I always look forward to updates! So epic and cute and hot! I can't wait to see how Zoro gets out of this mess, and how Luffy will manage to make it all worse! Hee hee! Poor sanji...losing his mind over Zoro. So cuuuute! Keep up the brilliant work!
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear god, this is probably the BEST fanfic I've ever read! I'm addicted! PLEASE write more!
Also, I'd definitely be interested in hearing about updates. My LJ is Dizzyfishy, I'm going to leave you a comment there too! <3
Also, I'd definitely be interested in hearing about updates. My LJ is Dizzyfishy, I'm going to leave you a comment there too! <3