rate_review Reviews

AH! I haven't reviewed the last two chapters!! We must make amends!

They were both great!

Poor frustrated Sanji...

I LOVE LOVE the dressing up in the costume and totally laughed when Zoro broke his play sword.

hey! This is fantastic. I love how you portray them dancing around each other, and the sex scenes are lovely -- er... well, you know what i mean. I love the story, and am wondering if there was a way for you to notify people who want to know when you updated. It's totally fine if not, but if you could let me know if you could or couldn't, that would be great!

I'm so glad you posted this link from onepieceyaoi on livejournal. I am enjoying this story a lot. Please keep updating a opy so I can read the next chapters!

Hehe Zoro is so hot in that disguise! I can't wait to see what happens next. :D Yay!

OMG...yes, Steamy is the perfect way to describe this chapter. Super hot s/z sex right here! I love how Sanji is using every piece of his sexual experience to make Zoro moan in pleasure!! Play the marimo like a fiddle Sanji! I love watching you work!!

You know you should totally post a link to this story at Livejournal at the OnePieceYaoi and ZoSan communities. Your fic deserves more traffic and way more praise than just I can give!

Dayum!!!! I tend to prefer Sanji on the bottom but this was seriously hot!!! I think I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke!

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Hahaha! What a great ending of this chapter! I could hear the 'sanji is cool' Music playing as he walked away from his destruction!

You wrote the fight scene very well and by the time it was over I was right there with Sanji and Zoro with a 'Wha? No sex?' feeling.

I look forward to seeing Zoros disguise! heh heh heh...I love dress up. Maybe Sanji can have fun stipping it off him! Or roleplaying! YEE!! FUN! I can't wait for the next chp!

WOW! I get a chapter dedicated to ME? Shucks!*kicks dirt* I really don't understand why more people aren't commenting on this story, Look at all the hits! (but then again I guess I have stories that have similar fates! Thanks for your comments by the way!)

What an awesome chapter! (and it was dedicated to me even!) Namis violent reaction was spot on and loved how the boys have grown in their relationship to the point of really appreciating each others strengths. The training/Sparing was super hot and SO well written! I could picture the action perfectly! (Zoro almost getting lost in anticipation was super cute too! And Plan ahead Sanji always pleases!!)

Great job again! As always I look forward to more!

*droooooooooooool*

So very awesome. I loved that Sanji was determined to make Zoro moan and like it. Also the serious ending and cute ode to a almost dead swordsman meal were fantastic!

WOOHOO! Another good chapter!