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for The Price of Freedom

by LotornoMiko

schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, guess Tamara's death expression should have clued me in that something was off about it, huh? Interesting that Allura's starting to cave a little herself, but I suppose that was inevitable. And speaking of second Voltron's, what of the Vehicle Force? Or do they not get to have any "screen time", hehe... Well, until next chapter then. Laters.
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tamara, guess I should've seen that one coming. Bed sheet noose, right? Well, at least the picnic went well... And alas, no impending children from Allura and Lotor...yet. Well, all things considered, I think this one's plot is kind of winding down, so maybe we're coming up on the finish? Until next chapter then. Laters.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hell, I'm practically the only who is reviewing here.

Yeah, poor girls, everything ruined by one lovestruck idiot. Well, maybe Allura can pull a few strings for them before they're shipped out. Of course, that's presuming nothing happens to her and Lotor on their little picnic in the...are they in a plain or a forest? Oh, well, until next chapter. Laters.
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, once it was obvious Lotor knew her and Allura didn't, it sort of limited the possible motives, especially since Allura was the intended target. I do believe she's suffering from a little condition known as Stockholm Syndrome? Oh, well, hopefully none of the other former harem girls are in the same boat, and for the moment alls well yadda, yadda, yadda... Until chapter 31, then. Laters.
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, one of his harem girls actually fell for him and was homicidally jealous, wouldn't've guessed that.... Well, I suppose we'll just see what happens next from here, I suppose. Until chapter 30, then. Laters.
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay - *knockknockknock* - how's that? Well, Allura is slowly turning into quite the naughty little minx, ain't she. And I almost pity Lotor that stack of paperwork, almost. And of course I still await the revelation of who the poisoner is, though i do like and rather agree with Lotor's idea for flushing him/her out. Well, until chapter 29, then. Laters.
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And let's face it, there's no such thing as a foolproof birth control method! Well, I'm thinking Nanny must have known something, but I still look forward to the full revelation. Until chapter 27, then. Laters!
schedule October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the line is officially crossed. Probably won't be long until Allura is pregnant, is it? Of course, Lotor still needs to be cured of the poison before he keels over on them, and the poisoner still needs to be revealed, but I'm sure that will be cleared up relatively soon. Until chapter 26, then. Laters.
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, oh my, oh my, Allura has broken. Or, sadly for Lotor, it really is all a dream of his. Only next chapter knows for sure. Until then. Laters.
person Kisa
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For two days I spent reading your story, and this has been the ONLY fic begging me to keep reading it! -tosses her one big cookie-

Shame about your mouse, there is a shortcut on your keyboard for saving without the mouse which is just ctrl S. and you can usally use your arrow keys or the tab button to go through the selections (i know it sounds like oober long, but it's worth it!)

UPDATE SOON PLEASE >< I want to know if they do produce offspring :3 Perhaps a set of twins?

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