rate_review Reviews

This story is coming along great, I read it months ago but it has been updated which was lovely~! I REALLY want it to finish though!!!!! Please keep writing it bc it is really great and the anticipation of the lemon scene is driving me crazy! The plot is really detailed and thought-out, and it progresses nicely. If I had a critique it would probably be I wish for more relationship development b/w Xel and Zel. You write well and I hope you keep it up for this awesome but small fandom! If you have any Recs please email to me~!!!! ^_____________^

It has been an actual ice age since I read anything in slayers, I used to be an avid xel/zel fan. Apparently I still am because this story and all your others have basically reawakened all those old feelings within me. Specifically this story, I read it in a day! Please tell me you are going to write more, it's marvelous! All your strokes have been. :) I can't wait to see what happens next!

yea... I registered on AFF just to review this story and for somehwere else to post the plot bunnies that spawned from reading it... Thank you verry much.

Anyways, this is an amazing story, how much would I have to beg for more? I really really, REALLY want to see more Xel/Zell smut, oh yes, crazy mazoku molests chimera XD. I always did like a healthy plot leading up to an enjoyable not-plot. o.O seriously, Lena/Amealia stuff? I... I think I could actually see it and would not mind in the least. XD I also can't wait to see what happens as Lina and Xel come to terms with the fact that neither of them really has to answer to any power lesser than LoN anymore. More as soon as posible pretty, pretty pretty please?

BAHHA HA.

"It's a seeeeee~cret"

I love Xellos. As much of a bastard as he is. :P

Poor Zelgadis. ;_;

*glee*

Another lesbian who writes yaoi. I never thought I'd find another like me. XDDDDD

:molests the author:

Simply amazing. You're every bit the writer that the author of "Poison" is, and I'm enjoying this fic immensely. I won't say anything pushy about wanting the next chapter, but I'm looking forward to more. Good luck with real life in the meantime; I can sympathize with its invasion into "fic time."

I love this story!! Wow I think this might just be the best! best Zel/Xellos slayer fanfic of all time!! I love it!! I love your Xellos and Zel and everyone else too! they are just so...great, wonderful, cool, smexy, totally allsome! XDDD just wow...please please please update soon I'm dieing here in suspence!

this story so great. I have read it at lest 6 times. i hope to see more of it.
good work

I recently found this fic and adore it. I love the angst level of Zelgadis (its very true to his nature in slayers) as well as the feelings Xellos has, yet seems to be able to understand. Oh and I love the concept of Lina as L-sama's general. She was a force for chaos before this anyway. Excellent writing.