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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! It's been so long since I've reviewed. I've been so busy and being 7-8 months pregnant I have decided that I need to sit down and read more fanfiction. ^_^ Yours was the first I picked up. I read it from the beginning, and to my surprise you had updated. So YAAAY new chapters!! Keep up the good work!! I hope to read more of your fanciful work. :D
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December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I hated when I got to the end and realized you hadn't updated in awhile. I sincerly hope you haven't abandoned this. <333333
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December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dear Miss mayablackwolf,
Um, hi? I know I've reviewed before, because as I'm sure I've stated previously, I really effing love your story. And it's been almost almost six months since you've updated, I just wanted to make sure that you weren't dead... So if you would please update again, or at least officially say if you do not plan to continue this amazingly awesome fic, I would be absolutely ecstatic. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Nyves
Um, hi? I know I've reviewed before, because as I'm sure I've stated previously, I really effing love your story. And it's been almost almost six months since you've updated, I just wanted to make sure that you weren't dead... So if you would please update again, or at least officially say if you do not plan to continue this amazingly awesome fic, I would be absolutely ecstatic. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Nyves
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October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, I haven't read or reviewed in a while.
I have to say this story is shaping up wonderfully since the last time I read it. I can't wait to see what happens when L finally meets Mikami.
I have to say this story is shaping up wonderfully since the last time I read it. I can't wait to see what happens when L finally meets Mikami.
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September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! I fucking love this fanfiction! you're an amazing writer and you deserve to win some awards! I can definitely feel the suspense in these last few chappies and I'm dying for an update! I also have my best friend reading this and she loves it as well! Oooooo, I love part-shinigami Light!...so much in fact that I'm doing FANART! I'll send you link to my deviant art as soon as I'm finished! XD I'm excited for you to see it! :stares at it: i think you'll like it! :drools: yes, you must! ...or I may commit fangirl suicide! jk XD
KEEP WRITING AND WIN SOME SHIT! YEA!
Loves!
Hails
KEEP WRITING AND WIN SOME SHIT! YEA!
Loves!
Hails
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July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm a first time reader of your stories. I've been reading this and so far I am impressed at your skill. There are mistakes, and they are unavoidable, but I would love to see more of these two. By what I see in the A/N's, you are busy, distracted or being held hostage by Writer's Block. Please continue when you can ^-^.
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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
I thought I should point out something, though.
In chapter eight, when they were in the white room, an eye scanner was incorporated in the entrance process.
However, you called it a rectal scanner... but 'rectal' refers to the rectum, or anus... when I think the word you were looking for was retinal. I don't mean to step on any toes, but I thought you might want to change that... for obvious reasons.
Keep writing! I really do love you work.
I thought I should point out something, though.
In chapter eight, when they were in the white room, an eye scanner was incorporated in the entrance process.
However, you called it a rectal scanner... but 'rectal' refers to the rectum, or anus... when I think the word you were looking for was retinal. I don't mean to step on any toes, but I thought you might want to change that... for obvious reasons.
Keep writing! I really do love you work.
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(i forgot to loginto my account...opps...)
Well-this is amazing! You have to finish it pleaaase??
Im like...dying to know what happens! :3
Well-this is amazing! You have to finish it pleaaase??
Im like...dying to know what happens! :3
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
X3 loved the new chapter, I was starting to get worried again about you not updating. Glad to see you're still writing this awesome fic. And please don't make the ending sad! Well I don't care if you take away Ryuk's apples actually but be nice to the boys ;) Please update again soon, I can't wait to see where this story goes <3
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoo~!!! a update~! so happy. =D
Well, I think L would definitely use the death note in order to gain those pro-kira supporters' trust. After all, both in the anime and the manga L was often acknowledged as being simlar to Light in the sense that he often would do small illegal things in order to catch others who were doing bigger illegal things. and yes, even using questionable methods to do so as well. "The end justifies the means", so to speak.
of course, I'm worried about how the Death Note would affect him... After all, as the original story showed us Light was just a normal student who actually believed in goodness and justice, etc... but as the power of the death note corrupted him he forgot about that part of himself. Would L lose himself too as well, I wonder?
Well, I think L would definitely use the death note in order to gain those pro-kira supporters' trust. After all, both in the anime and the manga L was often acknowledged as being simlar to Light in the sense that he often would do small illegal things in order to catch others who were doing bigger illegal things. and yes, even using questionable methods to do so as well. "The end justifies the means", so to speak.
of course, I'm worried about how the Death Note would affect him... After all, as the original story showed us Light was just a normal student who actually believed in goodness and justice, etc... but as the power of the death note corrupted him he forgot about that part of himself. Would L lose himself too as well, I wonder?