rate_review Reviews

That was fraking great... I mean Raito admitted to being Kira and L's ok with it... This is great, so wonderful.... And the whole L being awake when Raito was telling him he loved him and then L telling him back that was just beautiful... but I can't wait for the next chapter so yeah... oh and about the whole lemon no lemon thing, there should difently be Lemon....

*puts out birthday cake for L*

that was such a sweet ending to a chapter! ^^ although of course he has a lot to explain still... ^^;

this is bound to be THE BEST death note story i have read to date...and there have been many...many many

i absolutely loooooooove the fluff! ^-^ they're so sweet together
and the plot line...don't even start with that, it's absolutely fucking amazing!!! @.@ everything just...flows and the story comes together very nicely.

keep up the great work and please please please update soon!!!! :D

this is such an awesome story, i love it so much!

you're right, this was really unexpected.

and yet another cliffhanger.... you really love making your readers squirm, don't you?? :o

You are making me go crazy!!! Do you want me to die!? That was the most evil cliffhanger I've read in my whole life! I was screaming out load "Neeeeeej!!!" (thats noooo in swedish) My boyfriend even turned around and looked at me like I was som crazy idiot (wich I am somtimes =3). You have to post next chapter NOW or I'm gonna die... I dont wanna die, make Raito write my name in the Life Note :) Well I have to say something about the first part of this chapter too don't I :) I definately turd red from Raitos embarrasment and for trying to get my usual pale skintone back I tried to laugh it off, well not just beause it was embarrasing it was really funny too :) My boyfriend wondered why I was laughing so hysterically so he tried to steal my computer to read the fic, but thats boyfriend taboo! He already knows that it is a yaoi fic, he just want me to blush...dammit. Anyway please please please update soon! If I couldn't wait for you to update earlier it worse now :)

Grr i hate you but i love you now. That was one good plot twist and it was a funny chapter in my eyre atleast until you nearly killed watari. Please update soon i can't go on knowing that light may die again.

How clumsy of me to forget to tell... It's L Lawliets birthday tomorrow so everybody send your thoughts to him :)

Oh my gosh. Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh, I'm speechless!
You were right, those plot-twists threw me for a loop! and that cliffhanger...
Gosh, I don't know if I could wait for the next chapter...
I mean... wow...
Totally didn't see any of that coming, I love how unpredictable everything is!

Okay, it's official, I like fluff. I used to hate fluff but now you've made me love it. Let's recap on what this story has made me do since I started reading it ...

1. You made me post a review on AFF.net
2. You made me register to AFF.net
3. You restored my faith in fanfiction and general belief in the existence of good writers
4. You've made me anticipate an update of this story more-so than my fortnightly paycheck
5. You've inspired me to draw yaoi again ever since I stopped working for a yaoi website
6. And now you've made me like fluff (a near impossible feat)

And good grief, don't I sound like a gushing fangirl? Oh well, lol. The drawings are coming along, very slowly, it's incredibly hard for me to capture L and Light's features properly, the only ones who can really do it are the creators of Death Note, and this doesn't include me unfortunately but I'm trying my hardest.

Nice!!!!