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for Darkness Within your Light

by mayablackwolf

schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Was FREAKING GREAT!!!! So much happened OMG!!! I'm like totally flipping right now....WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING... I wanna know so bad.... This chapter was great, I seriously love you like a fat kid loves cake.....Damn....Awesome... I can't wait for the next chapter so please hurry and put out the next chapter cause I love you bunches.....
person Aurora Moon
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
of course L would be suspicious. who wouldn't be? even if it was somebody you loved, having them mysteriously heal fast would certainly raise a few eyebrows.

I'm so looking forward to Mr.Yagami's reactions, heheh.
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this latest chapter!
It gave me the warm 'n fuzzies all over.
^ w ^
I can't wait to see how Soichiro (Raito's father) reacts...
That and the plot turns...
plot turns are awesome! Keeps me on my toes!
Haha...
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww.... I love it, Raito telling L he loved him...In French... So Romantic... But anyways can't wait to see if L actually has some use of that bullet proof vest or not...Hehe .. Can't wait to see Raito's dad reaction and such.. But Your great...Awesome... so can't wait for the next the chapter....
person gryphonwills
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
person lovelle7
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hihi this story makes me feel so many feelings :) I laught at the first sentence, it was really funny written. A moment later I was all 'aww' a bit later than that it was like 'oh shit'. This story makes you emotionally involved and I love that. You descibe it so well so I feel whatever the charactes are feeling. I love hot coco too *drools I wouldn't pass up on that :) Please update soon cause I love your story (you know that :) )
person Draug
schedule October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehe yay for fulff. This is getting really good it gets better each chapter and i just want to keep reading. I just know that yagimis rection will be hilarious but im kinda worried for L. Hmm well i hope you don't separate the two
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, please please please update!
Your story's brilliant!
Really, truly brilliant!
<333
person Linkala
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe... Ryuk in a tutu, as soon as I read that line I got a scrap of paper and roughly drew how I pictured it, the drawing had little JD in hysterics all afternoon (laughing hysterics, not traumatized hysterics) I was going to scan it and email it to you but then my little hell-spawn spilled his Ribena all over it. I shall make it up to you with a few romantic pics of L and Light together, when I get some free time, and if I can capture Light's shinigami form exactly how it is in my imagination. How about L in his chibi strawberry pjs?

Once again another superb chapter, I find myself hanging out for a new chapter of this story almost as much as I'm hanging out for the release of Fable 2. Honestly, at this rate, if you happened to add a new chapter and at the same time I came home with a copy of Fable 2 I'd probably push the game aside and break out the Pocky and Marshmallows. *Shares large tray of P&M with author and other reviewers*
person gryphonwills
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like.

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