rate_review Reviews

Yet another fluffy chapter which I enjoyed as well... with a bit of plot thickening there and here.

overrall, a excellent read which took my mind off my current frustation writing my Death Note fanfiction "The rise and fall of kira" on adultfanfiction here. You can find it in the AU section, snice it's an alterate universe fanfiction which combines elements from the manga, anime and live action movies. Yeah, that's basically a shameless plug from me... ^^;;

Ever had that feeling where you don't know what is about to happen next. you have an vauge idea, but you can't just seem to write it down. And the characters aren't just obeying....
I hate that. -_- oh well...

How could we forget zaki? Well anyway random chaters of random fluff make the world go round right especial where those two are concernerd. Plot id nice too though just try not to be to mea n to them.Mmm kay. Ciao for now

Aww haha chibistrawberry pyjamas of doom X3. Haha Raito has a hickey. There were a lot of funny things in this chapter. Life has been a bitch to me too today… My computer has been messing with me and the internet hasn’t been what it usually is. But I reviewed now at last… The end was adorable and I’m worried about what Mr. Yagami’s going to do to Ryuzaki. Poor Ryuzaki hasn’t done anything wrong, he just expressed his feelings a little, tihi. I guess Raito has to save him :3 Anyway great chapter I’m longing for the next :3

hehe...*Snickers*hehe....Reflexes like a freakin cat....hehe..... Anyways this was a really good chapter, you had everyone in character but was still able to bend them to suite your plot. The whole L faking being sulky and angry with Raito seems like something he would really do. Also it nice to know that Raito has Zaki in his mind to comfort him thoughout this experience. So you made me very happy, I love this story. hehe...Ryuk in a pink tutu...hehe...so funny...

*Drools* Oh wow, if that was the lime I can't wait for any lemons you may be thinking of. You're a natural, and believe me I know what I'm talking about, I used to make a living via drawing for a yaoi website ... hehehe, please don't judge me *blushes*

I'm over the flu now but my son is unfortunately still sick, at the moment he's curled up on the couch hugging his L panda and crying, and I can't do anything else to make him feel better ;_;

I love this story, I really do, whenever a new chapter is posted I do a little happy dance in my chair and the rest of my day seems really good. Something tells me the story is going to get a bit sad and/or angsty from here, which normally I hate the prospect of, but this time I'm okay with it because I really wanna know what happens next. I may be wrong though, your story has so many delightful twists and turns :)

This was your first time writing a lime? Then you must be a natural :) I'm really looking forward to the lemon if the lime was this great. I like it then it's really descriptive as your was, when you almost can feel the feelnings that's described yourself. And you know that I loved the fluffyness :) Let's go make some more teaddybear-factors explode, hehe. And I think you know that I loved this chapter ( I love your whole story) I still havn't found any story that is as totally awesom as this :) Looking forward for the next chapter :)

Please please please you must continue the smut is good the plot is great and i'm in love with ryu-chan so please you must continue soon

YAY! L Kissed Raito.... This chapter was so great, I love the Ryu-chan in human form thing, Thats exactly what I thought when I read in the last chapter about the toy panda bear that it was just like L. But yeah can't wait for the next chapter.... Your Awesome...

The only thing I don't like about this fic is the fact that when it's all over I'll once again have to lower my standards as to what a great story is ^-^

Yay! The Yagami's are saved! L is badass O_o I hope we'll be seeing a bit more of this side of L in future, hehehe.

Sorry, my review is a tad shorter than my others this time due to the horrible flu circulating our household at the moment *brain dribbles out of reviewer's ear*

Wow that makeout scene was hot... really you did great, even though this chapter was a filler you still got that there was some underlining feelings there you know more than lust, even though L still doesn't fully believe Raito but it's getting there, anyway I love this as you know... Can't wait for more.