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Nice!

Ahhh, fluff now and then never hurt anyone. =D

it was kind of adorable, actually. ^^

Aww I loved that with Sayu and her wishes for Ruy-chan, it was so cute I got this ridiculously wide smile on my face X3. And L got so angry, I could see it so clearly and it was kind of scary, hihi. There was so many things I loved about this chapter. L carrying Raito and putting him in his lap and kissing him. L got kind of confident with Raito :D Sayu did somehow see right threw the feelings between L and Raito and even if Raito thougt that was embarrasing I think that will make things easier for him later :)I loved it! And next time there's gonna be a lime!! ( I'm also having that pervert grin you where talking abut earlier XD) I can't wait till next chapter! Anyway I really loved this chapter :)

Sayu is just too damn cute. ^^

And I can see L teasing Light about the whole bear bit in future chapters, heheh.

“I promise to obey my future sister-in-law’s words.”
Ahhhh, so cute! I love how you insert small slices of humor so that it isn't obvious and campy. You've made my day.

I Like it!!

Hey, I'm really enjoying your fic thus far. Its rare to find a Death Note fic writer that takes the time to produce a solid story with plot and intelligent characters. I like my lemons and pwp as much as the next fangirl but if all I wanted was "I hate you!" "I hate you more!" "Lets f***, while I plot your inevitable death...," I could rent it. I get that we can't chain you to your computer and force you to write for food but please please don't let this story shrivel up and die as so many do.
I haven't finished all the chapters you have posted yet so maybe my question is mote, but is there any chance of Mother Nature making another appearence...to L even?
Happy writing, and I'm sure I'll love what ever you have written next.

Aww, Raitos family was so adorable laying like that :) I was so happy you made that scene. How coud Ryuk be so mean, that was so evil, I almost got pissed of myself, hehe. Wiiee Raito's gonna confess to L, I'm so curious about hiw its gonna turn out X3. About the chapter before this you wrote about your ideas of an m-preg in a sequal. I didn't know what it was (even if you could figure it out by the name...) but I checked it up. I haven't read a fic wiht any of those before but if you write it I'm sure it will be great just as this chapter was :)

O_O ... Ryuk is so evil in this fic! *hides behind couch* It's a nice change from Observer Ryuk though, all Ryuk seems to do in most stories is watch what's going on and occasionally comment/laugh/demand apples, applause on breaking yet another DN fic mold! *claps + hands out Pocky and marshmallows to author*

OMG ... My little boy has a stuffed panda called L. Yes, my own toddler watches Death Note and he loves it (the parts I let him watch) even though he has a hard time understanding it. He asked for an L toy for his birthday this year (Awww) but unfortunately I couldn't get one, I WAS able to find a stuffed panda with a tuft of messy black hair on it's head like L's, and my little JD has yet to lose interest in L the Panda, lol.

I wish JD were old enough to read this story (or read at all) I have a feeling he'd love it even more than me, which is a LOT.

Now once again I must hold out and grit my teeth until a new chapter comes out, all the other stories I read now just aren't as good anymore in comparison *sniffle*

Good chapter.