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well, that was unexpected....

I didn't think that Ryku would be able to actually regonize Raito in his shigamai form...

nor did I really expect him to be that cruel.

Love it, love it, love it. SO great, It was so sweet that his family was sleeping in his bed, it just shows how much they care for him. Little Raito is so cute giving up his panda (hehe kinda like L's now his big human Panda) to his little sister. Aww brotherly love. But anyway it's great as usual, your fantastic, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep em' coming lol...

I like this story.

Awww :3 that was so adorable, sooo cute. The fluffier the better, hehe. Oh no in the end of this chapter you made it so thrilling I'm getting nervous even. I wonder when L realised he liked Raito so much :) I'm happy you already started to write on the next chapter since I'm so curious about wath your amazing fantasy takes us :)

I can tell it's going to be a lot of fun with Light's shinigami powers thrown in the mix, I'd love the ability to fly or walk through solid obstacles ... although I've always worried about what would happen if I suddenly turned solid halfway through a wall, feel free to use that little 'what if'
Hmm, I'm gonna just randomly guess that the special guest will be... Near? I honestly can't guess, this story is really unpredictable, AND I LOVE IT! *Hugs author*

As for the Mpreg idea: YES! I love mpregs! Especially when it's L that's pregnant, there are WAY too many pregnant Light stories for my liking. It'll be interesting to see how the pregnancy/birth differs from others if the parents are immortal/part demon ... then again I guess a man giving birth is strange enough, lol.

My nails? I've stopped destroying them and switched back to my old favorite of marshmallows skewed on Pocky. *Shares with author and other reviewers*

let me guess, it's ryuk?? I doubt he went back to the shigami relam after light gave up his death note. most likely he was just hanging around various humans waiting for light or something. :p

And yes you can use my idea. that's why I suggested it in the first place. I wasn't sure if you were going to use it though...

Awwww L's so cuddly with Raito, it's so cute. I love Raito's Shinigami form experience. It's so sweet that he added 25 years to L's life, though he probably does choke on a sweet hehe. But once again you have amazed me I love this story so much. I can't wait for the next chapter hope you put it out soon. keep up the great work..

I love it! So much fighting hehe.... Poor young L that was so sad. And the kiss and then the look on L's face so sad. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh my god, poor little L *cries into handmade L plushie* I wasn't expecting that, L accused of being a junkie by the cops. Probably because I'm so used to badly written, angst riddled stories where L was raped by a junkie when he was younger. Take that predictable themes! I must now go and chew my nails anxiously until another chapter of this story becomes available ... *shivers* I'm going into withdrawal already.

Tihi *wide smile. I'm actually laughing slightly. There is so many feelnigs in this chapter and I really love it! It was so adorable in the end and Lawliet seemed so human reveiling all that information to Raito. I'm so happy :) I'm not lying when I say that I get all worked up from your story, I'm runnig around in my apartment and don't know what to do cause I like your story so much. And I am checking every day for an update :) I really love this story, it's the best fan-fic I've ever read. I feel sorry for L and Raito they're so beat up, worn out and confused I really wonder what you have in mind for the upcomming chapter. Anyway it will be great! :3 Please update soon! (and I'm sorry if I expressed myself wierdly cause I'm not sure if what I wrote is correct grammar.) :3