rate_review Reviews

I have just spent the last few days reading through this fiction, chapters 1-29. I must say the writing at times has been quite poor, with glaring grammatical and spelling errors, and also misuse of words which have interfered with the flow of the story as I had to try and work out exactly what the author was trying to convey.

However. There is something compelling about the idea behind this story. Yes, most of the story is totally OOC, but I feel with good reason, as the author has done a good job of explaining what has caused the change of characters and their emotions. The concept of the main story is fabulous, and this is what has kept me reading this fiction for the best part of three days.

In spite of the problems with the writing itself, this story shines and is well worth a decent rating. I would hope that this story is beta-d soon, because then it would stand to be an even higher standard of fanfic.

I look forward to seeing more of this fic.

This is really good. I've really been enjoying this! I'm so glad you updated. Please update soon again!!

Woot! Another chapter this fast? You're amazing! That chapter was mind-fuck, but in a good way. And I definitely have my theories about this Lucian guy, but due to the fact that I've been thrown for a loop plenty of times in this story, I think I'll hold on to them for now ;) This story is pretty a lovely drug for me right now, so I hope you update again soon! Much luv! <3

P.S. there were a couple of spelling errors and some lines didn't match up. Just thought I'd let you know since I normally don't see this in your work.

I loved all the new chapters you wrote so far! :)

all the new information Ryku had was rather interesting to hear.. :)

OMK!!!! I checked in on this story on a whim and I was soooo excited to see it updated, I was starting to get worried. So I'm really glad to see you haven't stopped. I truly adore this fanfic, I love the idea and everything about it. Also I'm glad I can go back to loving Ryuk ;) Can't wait for your next chapter! (oh I'm also curious about your novel, so I hope you post it here or at least give a link) <3

I love this story so much.

I check every Wed to see if you have updated. XD

Keep up the amazing work and I beg you not to abandon it. D:

<3 I'm so happy you updated and can't wait for the next one! I love this story

I know what you mean about losing interest for a little bit there. I practically have an whole chapter almost done for my Choices fan-fiction, but I find myself occupied with my 3D modeling hobby... been trying to create 3d objects for imvu as an Dev there, you see. :P

That said, looking forward to see more chapters from you. :)

Great story I like all the twists and turns lol.

SO FAR THE BEST DEATHNOTE FIC EVER!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!