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OMG! Freaking Awesome..... I so can't wait for the next chapter (well the chapter after that lol). Once again you deliver, I swear each chapter gets better then the one before. hehe L was being a tease.... But Raito got him back. Aww you can feel the love between them. But anyways so looking foward to the next chappie, and I'm glad your sister wasn't hurt in the car crash. I know how you feel my sisters been in 4 car crashes. Much love.

Awww!! I'm sorry to hear about what happened to your sister. But like you said, she's alive so that's something :)

I liked this chapter, as usual. :) awaiting your next chapter. ^_^

you suck at lemons? yeah, right! I practically had massive nosebleeds reading this. XD

I'm SO excited for the next chapter. You have no idea. This is one of the best fan fictions I have ever read. No, actually, this is one of the best stories I have read. Period. I love how you weren't sure about your lime. You wrote it like you have been professionally writing for years. But mostly, I love how there is actual plot in your story. I hate PWP, and I'm even more delighted that you haven't made them do the nasty yet. XD You're a fantastic writer! Keep up the exceptional work.

In portuguese Bored means Entediado and in spanish Aburrido
XD

Aww that chapter was cute <3 I love the Wammy boys, especially with L playing daddy and Raito playing the mommy :3 soo cute! Please update again soon, and I hope you're feeling better!

Yay! I'm so happy I've waited forever and then my computer crashed and that sucked big time. I'm just glad that your back. So this chapter wasn't as long as your others but thats alright. Ummm.... Not really all that much I have to say about this chapter. But If you do decide to get a beta, I'd be more than happy to do it. Just e-mail me at greeneyes_40988@yahoo.com. But don't lose faith in your story, you can do it.

I read both the mini story and this one. I enjoyed both very much. :) This one did seem a little bit fillerish, but nothing too bad! (( compared to my fillers, anyway. -_-;; )) I laughed so hard at L's cute reaction near the end there. ^^

I love it! I hope to see the next chapter soon!!!!!! Good luck!

Awe, that makes me really sad that you almost discontinued the story so many times!
All of us love it so much...

I understand your worries though, and just remember that you're your harshest critic.
So what might be absolute horrid to you might not be as bad (or might be a lot better) for the readers.
And even when I do find minute mistakes (I'm a grammar nazi, so it's a fault of mine), I'm too smitten with the plot to even care about it (and that's saying something, especially when you remember my grammar nazi-ness).

But if you still feel like improvements can be made and that it's not your strongest suit, a beta is a very good asset. Not only can they really help with the editing process, but if you get stuck then they can help you brainstorm for ideas. You'd basically get their email, and email them each chapter as you write it. No rush, the beta works to your schedule. When they're finished editing, they'll send it back for you to read over once more (you can never do enough proof-reading!) and then post. Beta work is really easy and fun, so don't feel like you'd be inconveniencing anyone. In fact, if it wasn't for my busy schedule, I'd basically throw myself at the idea/offer to be your beta.