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God i love you this was the best birthday present ever(B-day =16 june) despite the gramma errors. This story has a unique plot the likes of which i have never seen before do DONT YOU DARE stop writting or i shall hunt you down and stab you with mikamis pen ok? Me and my friend have been waiting for this for ages!!!

Woot! I'm so happy you updated, I absolutely love this story! <3 Please update again very soon, you'll have plenty of time to write during the long car drives to and from Florida ;) Have great time in Disneyland!

YATTA!!! Arigatou for updating!! I have never found fault in your writing, I'm thinking it's more author angst. ^_^ Your an amazing author so shush!! Update soon and have tons of fun in Disney!!
-Ken

Aw, don't worry about it. I think every artist/writer has a tendency to hate their own works, no matter how awesome it is. Hell, even I hate my own works at times! I think that it's in our human nature to strive for perfection, and doing so we're truly never satisfied with our own creations. In fact you know my AU, Choices? I actually had to rewrite that chapter twice... and Misa ended up taking center stage in that one... ack. Always knew she was an attention whore. :p I'm going to have to work hard to bring L and light back into the full picture.

I think your chapter was wonderful though... :) it started out sweet, fluffy and ended on a dramatic cliffhanger.

This story is so good. I love how your following the profiles of the main chrarcters properly. I have only read a few authors that actually can properly keep the characters in the context given, yet build a new world around them. The story line is also very sold. When is the next chapter coming out?

I came across this fanfic two days ago and just finished reading all 19 chapters so far...I was hooked from the first chapter and it's difficult for me to find a fanfic I enjoy reading, or at least the ones I enjoy reading are never updated. That reminds me, I read your Detective Conan fanfic, The White Moon's Truth, don't think I reviewed though, and I liked that one as well, will you update it anytime soon? I hope you update this fanfic and your Detective Conan fanfic soon.

Must have more. I love this story. I like the way that Raito keeps getting hung up in his emotions, which I can see after having his soul torn from being in Mu. Please keep it coming I can't wait to read more.

GAH!!! i cannot get enough of this story!!! i rered it twice already, it's that good

loved this chapter and the side story you posted, please continue writing both!

keep up the great work!

... ok... you MUST keep writing this. I would threaten you in some way.. probably Misa related, but that just seems too cruel. So instead I will tempt you with cyber cookies. Mmmmm. With chocolate chips.

I love the switched up words btw (being completely serious), sometimes it just makes the line hilarious. Ex. When they were in the white room, L mentioned the "rectal scanner" It took me far longer than it should to realize that you meant "retinal scanner". I think I scared some of my family members with how hard I was laughing. Just imagining it.

*cough* Anyway. I hope you update soon. Do it for the cookies.

Well well it has been awile since last time. But when I read this it all came back, hehe. This was a funny chapter, I laughed several times. And I wish your imagination was for sale, cuz I would by it for a very high price :3