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March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay I'm so happy. I like love you. This was awesome, your getting to the plot. The whole gang thing was great and then when L slapped Raito cause he scared him was sweet. But yeah I so can't wait for the next chapter. Stay cool in all your awesomeness.
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The mental image of Light being scared to go outside and being a shut-in, well... it just had me rolling on the floor with laughter.
Gonna love L's sense of humor. :p
Gonna love L's sense of humor. :p
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaah yay, you added a new chapter!
And I understand about wanting to work towards being a beta.
Just know that my offer will always stand.
:D
Just like these reviews are like water for fish, bananas for monkeys, sugar for L and killing for Kira, that is what your chapter updates are for me!
So I'll be excitedly yet patiently (for the most part) awaiting your next update.
And I understand about wanting to work towards being a beta.
Just know that my offer will always stand.
:D
Just like these reviews are like water for fish, bananas for monkeys, sugar for L and killing for Kira, that is what your chapter updates are for me!
So I'll be excitedly yet patiently (for the most part) awaiting your next update.
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* YATTA AN UPDATE!! i do love this story Maya-chan, and am anxiously awaiting for you next installment!! Soon I hope! Ja ne.
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March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sorry it took me so long to r&r! Works been wearing me out lately... the latest chapter was awesome though! and i can't wait for the special chapter, <_< >_> heh heh, where is it? i kno ur hiding it around here somewhere... *rummages through the closet with a crazy gleam in eyes* Here kitty, kitty, kitty. momma wants to read you, no harm will be done... momma promises! 'I promise that you'll be safe with me! I won't let anyone else read you!' lol, i sa crazy... @_@ woo hoo! funny...
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the gang fight and L getting all defensive about Raito and I adore the story L told to the innkeeper, that was cute and funny. Also I like that L's not the only letter out there and that it's something bigger than the Wammy house with Near, Mello, and Matt.
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I an so glad that you have updated. There are very few stories that I follow anymore, due to people not being creative or just the overall grammar that they misuse. I do have one critique on your last chapter though, there were some sentences that needed to be added on to or just revamped to help the overall flow of the chapter, and a few spelling errors but, other than those two minor things (English minor in college here) the chapter and story are superb. Keep on writing!
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February 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Plzz update this story! This is one of the few story's about Light and Lawlet that are worth reading... And i really want to know what comes next.
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic please update soon!
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! This story had me hooked from the beginning!!! Plz continue!! lol...I just realized how dorky I sound....but...and addict must be sated.OvO