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Aaah you're back!
YES!

Haha... I loved this chapter.
Hell, I love every chapter.

But hopefully you'll update sooner...?
Eheh... I know exactly how life can be sometimes...
But after a while I started to worry about you.
xD

Again, I'll be awaiting your future chapters with baited breath!

And to tack on...
I noticed the reviewer before me mentioned a Beta...
If you don't know one, I'd be more than happy to be your Beta.

I've done some beta work before, and certainly wouldn't mind helping you out!

I just started reading your fic today, and I must say...it was worth it XD
I'm looking forward to the next update(though, if you keep your word, chp.20 will be the one I'm looking forward to the most;3)
Is this big, awfull new Kira Mikami? I doubt Higuchi would be smart enough to kill off 50 mill convicts in one night...
a small side note at the end of my review: have you ever considered getting a beta to read over your chapters?
there are some constant spelling errors and wrong usage of words (such as pacific instead of pacifist*early chapters*, and though instead of through) that I think should be fixed to make the flow of reading easier.

Ibe

Ahhh!! not a cliffhanger!

I'm happy that L managed to be so accepting of what happened to Light though. :)

the moments between them was just too cute! ^_^

Im so happy there was a new chapter out :) I was so worried about how L was going to take the confession and I'm so happy and relieved that it went so well. Seriously you are the best author ever lived! I love this story above all others I've ever read. There isn't a single thing that is bad about it. And this chapter seriously rocked! I hope you don't feel forced to write just because of us that is obsessed with this. I don't want you to have any bad feelings of feeling forced, we will wait for you forever if necesary :) I can imagine that I would have been feeling forced :/ Anyway I truly and sincerly love this fan-fic and Im so happy that you updated :)

Aww, poor Raito... He's finally about to ask L and stupid Kira has to go and ruin the moment. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!!!!

this is totally wonderful...all the confessions and everything, so cute!

i can't wait to see where you go with this!

Yay!!! I've been checking everyday since the last update. Oh so now L knows all of it, well almost all, and he still loves Raito. So sweet and he doesn't think his shingami forms repulsive either. Heh. Man I love you, I'm like bursting with happiness right now, Can't wait for the next chapter, Your Awesome, You Rock....

no worries about length, it was wonderful

can't wait for the next installment

the plotline for his is absolutely amazing

Fouloldron don't you dare diss this story! It is one of the bests i've ever read, (and I've read alot) And a lot of us don't give a s**t about simple grammer errors, though that retina-rectal one was quite funny *snickers* i don't think it should be changed. Leave it as it is *grins* aand when are you going to update? it almost been a month since the last one... i've got no good stories to read but this one *sniffle* and maybe some of twistedhilarity's stories, their good too, but she hasn't updated in just as long... woe is me...