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greatesthits...Run rabbitt run...

Hmmm. Overall, good. Well-written, with interesting insight into the characters' minds, and it was entertaining enough to read all the way through. But I have to say, I think the story started going downhill, and it made me more fond of MelloxMatt than LxMello or MattxNear. Absolutely loved the beginning. Skeptical when Matt and Near kissed and L and Mello's relationship was accepted by everyone. Literally gagged when L proposed to Mello. If Mello gets pregnant, too, I am so out of here...

OMJEEZ MELLO PREGNANT? LOL!It sounds fun! I vote....YES!!!!

Ooh...Mello preggers? *grin* M-preg is always a nice touch. Only thing I'd be worried about is the fact that almost every story I've seen that has m-preg doesn't get finished unless it's completely planned out to the last detail, so hopefully if you do put it in, you finish yours! *pats head* ^.^
I wanna see Mello and L's man-baby! *is already going out to buy it clothes and toys* Muhahahaa

...well. um, i've always been a fan of mpreg, but...i really like this story as more 'real'. for mello-chan to get preggers... it would be adorably cute, no doubt, but... unless there was a really /really/ /REALLY/ good explanation, i'd probably rather he not. but...it's your fic. if you think you want it, don't hold back. kay? i'll read it no matter what!~

Ooh...is he gonna...oooooh....pleeeeeeeaasee....*read on*IKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWIT!!!!! *actually screamed that several more times than she just typed it, but you get the drift* Yays!!! Engaaagement!! Damn it, Mello, just say YES already! THANK you. Little brat...and actually...hang on...can't quite remember...*goes to google* Oh, nope. Wasn't legal there till '05.

Damn, I loved this story. Don't make us wait /too/ long for the sequel, but feel free to take a break! You deserve it. *shoves cookies and spa shit at your feet* Enjoy.

epilogue:
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THIS JUST ABOUT /KILLED/ ME!!!!! omg. this was great! when he was about to, i just started SQUEALING!!! i was so excited. i loved this, and the line at the end was precious. pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!!!!!!!!! start working on the sequel RIGHT AWAY!!! and, BYTHEWAY!!! it's occured to me, maybe i already said it, that they both die in the series. i can only HOPE that this does not happen in your universe. please. or /i/ will die. yup. that's about it. GREAT JOB, SO CUTE!!!!~

Lol! No I wanna tell Roger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want to see what Roger has to say about it!No faiiiiirrrr! Keep writing!
lol very good ending really big cliff hanger....sad ending too when you think about it T-T

Mello: "Matt, you're supposed to herd sheep, not fuck them."
Near: "Your forgetting Mello, I am a rabbit, and rabbits were born to fuck!"
LoL! Had to think of it...... I love the comedy in this chapter!
My mom used to threaten me with chastity Belts...*shivers* 0-o

Aw...caught when I went to click this that this is the last chapter...you better write that sequel I saw you mention of ff! ^^ You're very welcome for my reviews. I thank you, for writing something I like so much that I actually do review. Now, on to the fic!!

*giggle* Silly Matt, they aren't gonna let you fly! ......
.....Mellooooo......don't hit L....he isn't your dad....Ooh, a slap. Work, slap! Wooork!! Yays. Mello's going to the hospital. That's good.

...DAMN, Roger's an idiot. I hate that man /so/ much. *giggle* Ah, Mello's yucky face. I think that face probably makes everyone smile. *laughs* Matt doesn't need a lobotomy, you silly boy! He's happy, let him be. You, my good lady, have finally done what no one else could. I will tolerate Matt/Near!

..At least for now. Only time will tell if it stays, though. :D This has been a great read, and I'm so so SO glad I looked into it. You've made me laugh, scream, and almost cry. *hugs* You rock.

Keep writing!

...I think this is the longest review I've ever written. *o*