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Ne, Mello!! *worry* I hope he's okay...

Agh, I've never liked Roger, and now you've given me another reason to hate 'im! Fufufu...Urgh! Keep working, it are be ah-mazing! *shoves plate of writing cookies at joo*

Oh, yeah! Random note: Thanks for your review on my LxMello. ^^ You got to it before my sister even found the copy on ff.net, and I was soooo nervous about that, I thought it was really kind of terrible! *huggle*

^^ I don't mean to give you anxiety! I really don't think you could screw this story up, I lovers it too much. *is just gonna leave this tab open and add stuff to the review as she reads*

xD Love these pranks. Morse code...nice. Love the interaction between these two as kids! 'Now tell me you love me back and quit being a whiny little girl.' *pokepoke* Thassocyoot! :D Fufufu...dissecting horror films is so much fun! ^o^ That's what makes them so awesome.
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...Shiiiiiit. Mello's doing it again. Okay, okay, we've got Matty behaving to stop him. Good.

I wasn't expecting an update this morning, it was just a random 'I gotta go soon, but let's see if anything's up anyway' click, and boom! There it was, and it made me happy. ^^ Keep working on this, but I have to go, or I'm gonna be late!

I don't really know what to say right now, but after that last review, I can't just say nothing, now can I? ^^ Keep working on this, it's so good! I hope it goes on forever. :D

...Okay...maybe not forever, but at least for a good long while!

Okay...gonna try and leave a better review than that last one. *scans over story to refresh mah memories*

Melloooo!! What's wrong with you? *poke* Did something happen to traumatize you? *pokepoke* Agh, I love this story so muuuuch. Keep working on it! The pace you're going at is definitely working; 'cuz we're getting quick updates with no quality suffering. I do have to wonder if it's a good thing that L can be sucked off like that by a 13-year-old, but can't return the favor, though. :D

On a random note, that dessert L gave Mello sounds absolutely delicious. ^^

I love you.
Do you know why I do?
It's because you can write a story that I adore so much, I review after every chapter, no matter how stupid I think I sound. And believe me, I think the one I'm writing right now sounds /incredibly/ stupid.
It's because you take romance, a thing that I find rather sickening, and make it into something that has me squealing and wanting more of it, then follow it up with a nice shower scene.
Mostly, I think I love you simply because you fucking ROCK. :D

OH, great, so I've caught up! Love it and the humor has me rollin'! "His toes!" Ha ha! And now Near knows! Hmm, things could get interesting. Looking forward to an update!

Joie,
Gloria

I just finished chapter four and I laughed through the entire thing. Chapter one particularly had me rolling with the Mello/Near dialogue. "That's not even a real costume. And you're an albino in pajamas every day of the year!" ----Gawd, that was hilarious. I'll finish this up tomorrow, just wanted to tell you how much I was enjoying it.

Cheers!
Gloria

^.^ Glad I made your day. Your reply made mine about fifty times better! This chapter was pretty cool, too. I always like getting a little peek into Near's mind.

^o^ I love this story. I absolutely adore it! I can almost never find any good L/Mello, so I'm very happy to have found this one. I can't wait for more, update soon! :D