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OMG man that was totally awesome!!!!!! I read it till 3 and a half in the morning even though I had to wake up at 7 to go to work. 

Congrats! 

Loved it!

I have to work tomorrow and I stayed up entirely too late reading this. But it was absolutely fabulous and I don't regret it. Although I now have large bags under my eyes that I might actually need makeup to cover... anyway. Great awesome epic job! I love this fic. It kept me on my toes but also was fluffy and light. It was a great blend of genres. The pairings were all perfect. The ending was fabulous and Luffy's random comments were like sprinkles to the entire thing. So, great job! I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future.

her secret was hawkeye!!! since when??? that threw me for a loop when i read it. figured i'd read the whole thing before i commented and all i have to say is holy shit. that was fucking awsome. the chapters were long. the details were great. the story line wonderful. and the sex scenes, even just the make out scenes, were the best i've read. i will be hard pressed to find better. i bow to your greatness and hope that it will never fade.

This was so good! I couldn't stop reading it...your characterizations were perfect. Your storyline was a bit simple, but you covered for that really well by making everything intense. It was great. For sure one of my new favorites.

One thing though, if you still care about changing it now that you're done. Chapter 13 still had the author-to-beta notes in it, which got rather distracting.

Kudos!
Miss Alise

Man, this is awesome.
I admit I hesitated to read 'cause of the title and the possible lameness, but you really did a great job of avoiding cliches and/or playing on the cliches in a way that makes it funny rather than annoying. You language is fluid and pleasant, easy to read and understand. (total plus)

Only thing is the whole daddy... thing. Now, I'll admit you did great avoiding that Frank became annoying as an OC, however the whole superhero thing... Well, personally I'd have avoided the cliche, although the fact that Zoro did it spontaneously helped. A lot.

oooooo~ I like this one and hope to see more really soon.....personally I didn't see to much when it came to mistakes cept maybe a bit more description would be good.

Just a fan from LJ who is up-to-date here, wanting to show support to this fabu story here on it's new venue!