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for Beyond fate, there is always choice

by Ainzfern

schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow :D I loved it! Great plot and your characterisation is excellent as ever. I especially liked the Chey/Tahna subplot, I thought you handled it brilliantly. Great mix of tension and humour throughout. Great job! Keep on writing ppllleeeaaasseee :)
person Avernion
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I lved it! A very good story. X) And I would love to read more about Chey and Tahna ^^

Thanks for bringing us this story.
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore the way you have Raoul and Katze interact together. Its brilliant, really. Chey's conversation with Tahna was hilarious as usual (and enlightening as well.) I wish I could find an image of a restored Katze and Raoul 'together' (drools...) I can't wait for the next installment (and Tahna's insults and Chey's responses) so please update soon.

Ganbatte!!
Ryn
person Avernion
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay. An update ^-^

Katze and Raoul saying they love each other, is that the calm before the storm? Not that such words are a calm thing. ^^

Can't wait for next chapter!
person Avernion
schedule October 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely. Just lovely. Neeson has won my heart. I am so a RaoulxKatze kind of gal, but I want to know about those to much more. Laugh.

You've done a great job on this one. =D
person Avernion
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And like always, I have a playdate with a dictionary as I read your stuff. If only my english teacher could see me now. Lol. So many improvements I must make X)

He he. I like Tahna. He always makes me laugh. ^-^ So your going to give him a lover? He do need one. Laugh.

Keep up the good work! Great story.
person leedee
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must confess that every time i`m visiting this site i`m waiting for your update or new story.I`m really curious what and who specifically will you write about this time...
i find your stories refreshing and warming. how you describe elites and their homes, theire reactions and capability to be more considerate and complex
i like it how they evolving so naturally. their domestic issues and experiences making them human and worth admiration.

I like Raouls new balance: the way he agrees with Katze about elits haughtiness ,doing it with feerie of possibilities : irony, jokes but also visible solidarity with his own kind. and distance?
I also like this assholistic ;) chracter of Tahna, hilarious poor elittee who doesn`t know when to stop and bite his tongue.
I would like to see him changing? but who would make such an effort ;-)
and what will happen when in the hauseholds of our grate blondies appears teenager or stray kat ;)...did you maybe read `Force Majeur' by juxian tang? ...
i would like to see how will Raoul react really. but...
for now i`m looking forward...
thanks
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If I could I would hug you. Ainzfern you rock!! As always everything you write is so good (I might be bias because I like Raoul and Katze.) And four chapters in one day. Total awesomeness. I can't wait to read Chey and Tahna meeting. Now thats going to be veerryy interesting.

Thank you for sharing!! Ganbatte!!

Ryn

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