rate_review Reviews

Of course you know I love anything you write. What does it matter that the concept of human wielding Pokemon powers is not your original concept?! The true mark of a writer is how they use that concept with their own ideas. Can I, the reader, see you, the author, in the writing? Sure can. Think of it this way, just about every movie that is coming out today is the sequel or remake of a movie made years ago. Do we discredit the movie simply because someone came up with the idea earlier? So long as you give proper acknowledgement to the original writer and we can see the new author's ideas too, nope. Anyway, I like how you are including Paul into the story. I am really interested in seeing how the rematch between Ash and Paul is going to go. Update soon!!

Sincerely,
Akewataru
P.S: Just Akewataru is fine. Actually, both names mean the exactly the same thing. Although, Akehanareru is more descriptive, "The darkness giving way to the light of morning" opposed to simply, "To become daylight", I personally like I go by Akewataru mostly.

Wow, you're quick! I just posted that review this morning. By the way, "Pewter" is spelled this way. You might have made Paul a bit out of character when he attacked Anabel. Paul may be an antagonist, but he always seems to keep his cool better than Ash does (in the anime), and has some honor in battle. He also shows some respect to authority figures like Nurse joy and Officer Jenny, but that's about where his good attributes end. Tell me how you feel about this. When did Paul become a multi-element? I thought he only had steel. Update soon!

Sincerely,
Akewataru

I am so glad that you decided to write another Pokemon fanfiction. I love your previous works, especially with the inclusion of Valdrade, Lance, and the capability of humans being able to use Pokemon powers, and still read them again and again from time to time. Please update this story soon! I want to know what happens next!
~Akewataru~

Unique and eyecatching, impossible to stop reading as well!

Great story with a very interseting idea.

Good chapter, lemon wasn't as good as the one in your otherstory the excellent "The Pokemon wars".

Brilliant!
This story has limitless potential.

Great story, but when is the threesome action going to begin?

hmmmm very interesting SSJ04 Mew... I hope you update this story soon... Is Ash the Shadow master like in the other one with Valdrade... And is his full name Ashura.. Please update soon