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And once again poor Lotor is falling for Allura, only this time he seems to be resisting, interesting. Nice touch with the politics, by the way. And you're sure there won't be a more effective escape attempt? Or any more at all, for that matter? Doesn't seem like Allura to just "roll over and die", if you will. Well, until chapter 10, then. Laters.

Huh, you'd think he'd be a little more upset at that, what with his manhood just frozen off and all. Nice to see her brand is being taken care of, and that the trauma of it all hasn't robbed her of her rebellious fire. I'm betting an escape attempt is not too far in the offing, right? Well, until chapter 8 then. Laters.

Poor Allura, ouch... Well, again I find myself curious for more, and it's nice she at least has someone in the harem she can talk to. Might want to name them, by the way. Well, until next chapter. Laters.

An interesting tale you got going here, I find myself curious for more. Although I question the wisdom of trying to write two fics at once. Until next time, then. Laters.