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Okay, I misspoke, THEY BOTH NEED THERAPY!!! Yeesh! I can understand the need to get a decent release, but damn it Lotor, so not the right call! Clearly the next fifteen chapters are gonna rocky as hell if this keeps up. Man! What else could go...something tells me I better not finish that thought... To be honest, when he first grabbed Romelle in the harme room, I thought he was going to ask her for advice on changing Allura's mind, but that hope fizzled pretty quickly. Okay, until 117, I guess. Laters.

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Seems what she really needs is a therapist, really. And it was going so well at first, too.

Two daughters, heh. There goes my fifty bucks... Oh, well, easy come, easy go...

Okay, I'm gonna guess that from here they are gonna at least try to work through the sexual problem, possibly with a little help from a therapist, as previously mentioned, and/or Haggar? Well, until chapter 116, then. Laters.

Wow, what a day for them! And next chapter should see the other one born, and then seventeen chapters more to the story, and I have no idea what's going to happen in them at all! As far as the second twin's birth goes, though, I feel like I'm suddenly watching a sort of replay of my own entrance into the world. Yep, I'm a breach baby, c-section and all. As my mom lovingly tells it, I grabbed onto her ribs with both hands and screamed, "NO! NOT GOING! I'M STAYING!" Yeah, feet and but first, that was me. Wasn't I darling? I am a tad bit worried about Allura, though, given how wiped she is after getting out just one. Princess Adora, huh? Sounds a little like the name of the Princess in Disney's "Sleeping Beauty". Oh, well. Until 114, then. Laters.

Aww...very fluffy... But again your commentary kind of lacks a warm fuzzy, and now I worry that her tiredness may prove more problematic than she thinks... At least they're actually progressing now, kind of. Oh, well, until 112, then. Laters.

Well, at least they're sort of progressing... And Lotor had a pretty good point about her being a little too overprotected. Now, if they can just make a little, itsy bisty teensy bit more. So what are you going to do about that FF.net nut job? Track her down and send Lotor to assassinate her? Just kidding. Sorta... Well, until 110, then. Laters.

When she compared him to Zarkon, I almost expected Lotor to reply, "I'm not Zarkon." Oh, well, ce la vie. Nice coronation, and I have to say liked how Haggar held her back, and that she closed her eyes when the swords came down, but from the sounds of it those three were literally hacked to pieces! Ouch... And now I take taht newly introduced gal will be taking up residence as top villain? Has to be some kind of conflict to keep this puppy going all the way to chapter 131. Well, until 107, then. Laters.

Hmm, that was an interesting way for Lotor to vent some of his immediate anger, and somehow appropriate, as was Zarkon getting dumped pauper like into the Pit of Skulls. I got to say chapter 104 was exceptionally well written, I was very moved, especially with the twist at the end with the crib, and I liked the juxtaposition of the two funerals. Many kudos! It occurs to me, though, that Cossack could have an illegitimate child or two out there, after all he did say he "got around". It's not like very mother informs the father or bothers to marry him, right? Well, until chapter 105, then. Laters.

Ah, man... At least you gave him a nice send off. Does this make it a Pyrrhic victory, of sorts? And yeah, Lotor probably would have killed him if he'd tried at any other time, huh? Guess I can't blame him for a dying wish. Speaking of, Lotor and his group had a heck of a time getting into the throne room, but hey, at least they managed it. I imagine within the next few chapters we'll find out who tattled on Lotor? Well, until chapter 103. Laters.

Ding dong, the wicked King is dead! Etc. Nice battle, loved every second, well done! One thing, this chapter is marked 101, did you accidentally forget to post 100? Well, until next time, and hopefully saving both Allura and Cossack. Laters.