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for The Harem Slave

by LotornoMiko

person Deenasaur
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Unghhhhhhh!!!! I want to badly for Allura just to LOVVVEEEEE HIMMMM!!!! -pulls hair out-
This story is making my anxiety spiral out of control. Lol
But it's far too amazing to stop reading.
-sighs- if she leaves him, I am going to be sorely dissapointed...
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And the final battle is nigh! Can't wait to see Zarkon's final moments. And I really hope you didn't kill Cossack after all, I actually find myself liking the guy, or at least your characterization of him. And I'm definitely looking forward to seeing who just ran him through, I mean how could Zarkon have sent someone so fast?! If it was even him! Ooh, now I'm in suspense! Until chapter 100, then. Laters! 100...whoa...
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was an interesting part of the ride. At least Lotor's starting to realize how bad he's been, that's something, anyway. And just when I thought Zarkon couldn't get any nastier, you go and prove me wrong. Good for you! 131... ooh, that's long. Can't help but wonder what's gonna fill everything after Zarkon's history. Well, until chapter 99, then. Laters.
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
To be honest, I kept hoping for Lotor to just pass out from being too drunk, but sadly it didn't happen. But at least he snapped to his sense enough to stop in time. And I agree, there'd just be no way Lotor would let Cossack live after such a fiasco! Though maybe later Cossack could admit to having thought about slipping Allura a love potion but changed his mind.

The play, what little we saw, so to speak, was nice, and sounded suspiciously like an alternate take on "Romeo and Juliet", right down to the name... Oh, well, no matter. Until chapter 96, then. Laters.
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, were they the ones who had a meeting with Zarkon and Lotor in the Harem room? Cause I vaguely seem to recall that. Well, the plan has begun, here's hoping it work's out with few problems, but as I believe the saying goes, "The best laid plans of something, something...."

Sadly, Zarkon's staying true to form, but that's why we hate him, don't we? Well, until chapter 94, then. Laters.
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you're not exactly giving me a warm fuzzy with that commentary...

So when it said it needed blood, it was only sort of literal. I can almost see the look on Zarkon's face now, in utter dead pan shock! But at least we finally got to see Voltron in this fic, that's something at least. And yet again into AU ville we go, since I can't recall Voltron absolutely needing Allura or someone of her family in a lion in order to assemble it before; in fact I rather vividly remember the five space explorers doing it twice with no problems at all(and would have continued to do so had Haggar not killed Sven!). Oh, well, at least the war's almost over, and I agree at not really wanting to read another one so soon on it's heels. Until chapter 92, then. Laters.
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, getting some sweetness in, I see. Kind of figures the trauma would give her a nightmare or two. And I can't say I'm too surprised that Zarkon bolted like a rat. Sorry to hear about your cat, I know how it feels(lost a dog just over a year ago and it still hurts a little to think about her leaving), hope you feel better soon. Well, until chapter 90, then...90...oooh... Laters.
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I thought as much, given all the "children" comments from Haggar. Haggar without her magic, what an odd thought. And Lotor, welcome to the wonderful world of triage - the dying and almost dying get served first, deal with it. I look forward to the twins births and the revelation of the genders; I'll put down $50 on one of each. Until chapter 88, then. Laters.
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ouch, that clearly took a lot out of Haggar. I'm not worried only because you assured me there's brow beating for Lotor and Cossack coming from her. Hasta la vista, Cortona! Almost a pity, for a one chapter appearance only she was actually a rather interesting OC. Oh, well. Now, to off Zarkon and Merla! And possibly to unlock the true secret of forming Voltron. And from the sounds of it, when you get depressed Allura suffers almost excessively, poor girl. I imagine the rest of the V-Team doesn't do too well, either. Well, until chapter 86, then. Laters.
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, about time. Too bad no one thought to try and cancel the viruses after they arrived. And, yeah, a little upsetting about Romelle, but then Lotor was expecting to live long enough to have to explain what actually happened to her, was he? And I see Zarkon took off like a rat, or found a place to hide at least. And what happened to Allura?! She can't be dead, you wouldn't do that...at least, I don't think you would, and you wouldn't get all the way to over a hundred chapters if you did. Though I'm guessing she is trapped somewhere. Oh, well, I guess I'll just have to wait on pins and needles until Chapter 84 for the answers. Until then. Laters.

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