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Hmm, a bit tense, yet thrilling. Somehow, though, I don't think this is going to work the way Lotor hoped it would. Well, until chapter 57, then. Laters.

Short, a little slow, but good progress for Lotor and Allura, all the same. Well done. Until chapter 56, then. Laters

Hmm, an interesting re-write of his mother's story, given I believe in Golion Zarkon actually killed her for refusing to marry her. Yes, this is definitely going to make Lotor reevaluate a lot of what his father's done in recent history.

Virus, huh? Ouch. In my case it was simply freezing up before getting to the log in page, and then attempting to do something or other with Norton Goback, and after smacking the reset button in the middle of that line item for the second time it asked me if I wanted to let Norton try again, I clicked "no" instead of "yes" like the previous time, and then it asked if I wanted to remove Norton Goback, and like an idiot I clicked "yes", and within a few moments, one hosed Windows OS. Doh. Basically, when I get frustrated, my IQ drops into decidedly negative numbers. If I'd just left it alone, it might have eventually gotten over itself, but, oh well... Well, until chapter 55, then, and I hope you regain the will to write. Laters.

Yeah, Lotor's world is a crumbling down, ain't it? And, yay, Allura's getting her first magic lesson, and has been given something to help with the annoying morning sickness. So far all is good all around. As to your computer, what happened, hose Windows, somehow?(Did that myself in recent history, though fortunately I didn't lose anything[whew!].) Well, until chapter 54, then. Laters.

Hehe, I see nobody warned him about the less pleasant aspects of pregnancy. Well, hopefully Haggar will fill him in while she's giving Allura a little assistance, and hopefully something to combat the morning sickness. Well, I await Lotor's next attempt at wooing in chapter 53. Laters.

Just found your fic. I was so happy a few chapters ago that lotor has figured out what is wrong with his fathers empire when he want to take care of Arus. His father is so busy conquering he is not taking care of what he has. To run a large empire you need loyalty of the people to maintain it. Not drop a chemical bomb on a inhabited planet just to test it. Also look at the room he placed the which in, why anger someone who helps you win battles. I also love the fact the king and council is at this point underestimating Allura's power. She has been trained to be a queen. Well I'll read more tomorrow.

I picked up the story about 3 days ago, and I'm VERY thankful about that. At least I get a lump of chapters to read all at once! Very good story, book quality. Lemme read up to 50 and then I'll be begging for new chapters with everyone else! >(^_^)<

I suppose this means the wedding, if it happens, will probably be just before the baby's birth, or just after it. In the meantime, let's get wooing! Wrote a date and then chopped it, huh? Well, you're the author. Until chapter 51, then. Laters.

Poor Lotor, he just can't win today. At least Green Lion is located and Red Lion isn't far behind. And I'm thinking Allura will come around given a little time. I hope. I look forward to the next installment. Until then, laters.

61?! Guess that goes under the file of "spoke too soon"... So, they found Yellow Lion first, huh? And it's actually pointing the way to Green Lion? Interesting. I imagine, as it always seems to be the case, that Black Lion will be the last to be uncovered. Just a thought, but why doesn't Lotor have Allura and the other Arusian harem girls go over a copy of the hieroglyphs? As natives of Arus they might be able to pick something out the Doomians can't a little faster(I also had a flash of one of the younger girls timidly asking Lotor if they could have an up close look at the lions once they're all found, if not a ride in them, and Lotor decided that's shouldn't be too be a thing to arrange for them - it is one of their legends come to life after all, it just makes sense they'd want to try and at least touch it). Course, that's also depending on the Arusian language having not changed too terribly much since Voltron was, how shall we say, retired? Like I said, just a thought. Well, until chapter 48, then. Laters.