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Hmm, not working out the way she hoped, is it? For either of them, really. Even Lotor seems to be straining a bit. Through the wringer, you say, huh? That should be fascinating to watch/read. I look forward to it. Until then, laters. Oh, yeah, and Happy New Year!

And now alas poor Allura, her own body betraying her! Poor girl can't seem to figure out where she stands anymore, can she? I imagine we'll be leaving Pollux in the very near future, now? Though I am loath to see Zarkon again Well, until next chapter, then. Laters.

You don't say! I didn't know about that. Hmm, poor Allura, she's just not having the best day, hell, week. And Romelle seems to have gone just a little bit crazy! Oh, well, it's not like she could actually win Lotor over, and like Allura said, if she could do it she could have him! Well, I can't think of anything else right now, so, until next chapter then. Laters.

Hmm, well that's something to look forward to, I suppose. The Lions, I mean. As for the Lord's daughter in "Dragonriders Of Pern", she just got herself all muddy, hair included, and blended in with the staff for about ten or so years, then was picked up by the Dragonriders as she also happened to be one herself - the dragons choose their riders, not vice versa, as I understand; I haven't actually read them either, but my mom has and has mentioned this plot point more than once. Well, until chapter 18, then. Laters.

Yeah, damn... I do believe you took part of Romelle's disguising herself, the self dirtying, from Anne McCarthy's "Dragonriders Of Pern" novels, did you not? Haven't read them myself, but my mum has most of the early ones and has mentioned the one rider/former princess using the same trick(of course, she was, like, eight or so when she pulled it off). Well, I somehow doubt there's going to be any improvement anytime soon, short of enter the V Force and the return of Voltron, but even then, still. Okay, until next chapter, then, laters.

Yeah, poor kid, ce la vie... I almost hope Romelle has suicided, spare her from joining poor Allura in hell. Als poor Planet Pollux, we knew it well. Until chapter 15, then. Laters.

Ah, classic Doom treachery at it's finest! Alas poor Avok, he just doesn't have any luck in any reality, does he! (I recently found the clip of his and his dad's demise in Golion on Youtube.) One question - what happened to poor Bandor in that melee? He sort of...vanished. And I'm guessing the watcher from the tower was Romelle. Well, until chapter 14, then. Laters.

And upon her arrival at Pollux - hope...dashed... My, nasty little cat fight, wasn't it? And Zarkon playing Avok false, typical. But then again, it might very well be vica versa, yes? An elaborate ruse to free Allura? Yes, maybe, possibly? Okay, until chapter 12, then. Laters.

Oh my God, someone's writing Voltron stories! Voltron was my first experience with anime and as such, remains a fond and loved series. I just happened across your story while browsing through the new section and I'm glad. Of course, as much as I loved Voltron, it's been a good decade at least since I've seen the show, so the idea of cannon behavior flies out of the window for me. What I do remember is that Lotor had an unhealthy obsession with Allura, and that as 'evil' as he was, all he ever wanted was to make her happy. I mean, come on, he would subjugate whole star systems for her, right ;). I read much more than I comment, but I will be reading, and thanks for posting.

Oh, well, if you say so. Thirty five? Whoo...

Interesting Torture of Allura, hehheh. And does Zarkon have to appear? Can't you just have him accidentally fall down three stories in a one story building? Well, until chapter 11, then. Laters.