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I loved that ending it was super hot and really sweet I hope to see more love hina like maybe Shinobu/Mutsumi would be great.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter. How about all four of them so to a strip joint and Tsuroko pay's for a lap dance for Motoko from a female striper

That was great it was just the thing to help motavite me and get me wroking again can't wait for the next chapter to bad it'll be the last one.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Great update and I'm sure the next chapter will be great to.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

This is a really good fic I'd kinda like to see them have sex in a subway car with a lot of people all around them

THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!! And I like what DJ Lucky Duck Fuck siad that would be great.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Hello first I would just like to say how much I liked Cheaters. Great fic 5 stars all the way. I would just like to ask if there will be any more like a chapter where they could make Keitaro there sex slave/toy.

looking great so far. i had an idea of where u coudl go w/the fic, u coudl have a few chapters where motoko gradually falls deeper and deeper into sexual servitude 2 her sister, becoming little more then a fucktoy 4 her--she has toys in her all day at school every day and has that tight japanese full-body sexy rope-bindings under her clothes), when she gets home she gradually has 2 spend more and more time as tsuruoko's slave and do more obscene slave things (starts having 2 dress up in slave bondage gear around the inn, tsuruko starts tying her up in sex and then progresses 2 chaining her 2 the wall or hanging her from the ceiling w/ropes/chains 4 hours, tsuroko forces her 2 get her nipples pierced and attaches a little gold chain between them that she can use as a leash 4 motoko, and so on). it doesnt all happen at once of corse, u woudl have 2 span it out over a a few chapters at least. eventually naru and mei r so concerned about it that they confront motoko and tell her that this is going 2 far, their her friends and they cant let her do this 2 herself. motoko sees that shes falling 2 far into this and confronts her mistress and wants 2 kno if tsuroko actually loves her or is just using her 4 sex and the thrill of power, because motoko has no problem doing all this 4 the person she loves if that person loves her back, but even tho it'll break motokos heart, she isnt going 2 give up her life and personality 4 some1 who doesnt love her and is just using her. cuz the way i see it is that tsuroko is making herself feel better after being shattered by her husband's betrayal by finding another person who loves her (motoko) and taking compelte and total control of them, which subconsciously 4 her means that motoko will never leave her and betray her like the husband is because shes too much under tsurokos control, also the increasing hard love and sexual torment is to tsuroko like getting back at her husband, using motoko in his place.

u can decide on how u want to end this...maybe it ends happy w/tsuroko realizing what shes doing and reforming her way of treating motoko, so that they wind up with a stronger love than ever and motoko back 2 being a servant 2 tsuroko but not just a fuck-slave, with toned-down treatment. or maybe it ends w/tsuroko losing herself 2 much 2 the thrll of power 2 give up on it, and forcing motoko back 2 her place as sex slave because motoko's been 1 for 2 long and no longer has the willpower 2 resist her mistress's commands. or maybe u come up w/a different ending! whatever, lol. u asked 4 ideas so there they r

btw, if u like the idea 4 the fic's direction i just gave u might wanna save it and then delete this review so it doesnt give the rest of the story away 2 every1 lol

o whatever ideas u do tho, plz dont do anything that has going 2 the bathroom involved, thatll ruint he whole fic. i kno sometimes they do crap like that in bondage fics and it always wrecks the whole thing 4 me

o ya, and whatever u do, some foot sex woudl be great!

keep going! i cant wait 2 see tsuroko *really* enjoy her power over motoko and show her how strict she can be!