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for I love Both of You

by Nofretari

schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The format you use is a little strange and sometimes hard to follow. Also, I noticed that you are posting separate parts of a bigger story as their own story.

It might help you to just publish the one story that these are all parts of, and make it a multi-chapter story with each chapter having different titles. It makes it easier when you upload them as chapters instead of as separate stories.

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