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The feeling is mutual, cariad. Have you found us on MangaBullet by the way? http://www.mangabullet.com/MRS-Jeevas/profile

Glad you're liking the story.

*sobs* It's both sweet and sad. Matt's so cute and Mello so sexy...
I love how 5 stitches are not as important as the goggles XD

Once again, brilliant chapter.

I swear we're reading each others minds though. Haha.

Love it. <3

He had hated the fact that they kept sliding down so much, that he had bent the arms right down over his ears. The arch of the glasses cut into the bridge of his nose now.

WHY I DON'T WEAR MY GLASSES. That right there. They slip and piss me off, so I have them all tight, and the nose piece leaves such a dent in my nose. AUGH. I'd just rather be blind.

And as always, amazing chapter! x3 It was hopelessly sweet. And these two are so cute! XD I just love them.

"There is nothing you can deal out, Keehl, that I can't take."

OhMattydon'tmakemecry! :S That line srsly srsly kiiiilled me... in a good but sad way.

So anywayz, I am so happy you're writing another story. I just decided to click over to your profile, and sure nuff, there was a new story already 16 chapters long. I absolutely adore this story, and you! ;D

(777 views after 16 chapters... in no way humbled to the point of squirming... much...)

Mattkun:

Awww, poor Century. I hope that his body will be taken back to the Llyn Peninsula from where Wammy's House stole him. Mind you, given what he did in your RP, the local tip might be more appropriate. Then again, he's Welsh, so the corpse candles might give away his grave. Mmmm....

Love you too! Glad you're enjoying the story. Mello is... yes, he is. *nods*

Nine Lives:

Chapter 16 pretty much wrote itself. I'm not saying that I wasn't in control of my characters, but one of them had lost his temper and so I wasn't about to try and control him. I just kind of cowered in the shadows on the landing and hoped that Matt could sort it. Oh! And took notes, of course, as a good author should.

Glad you enjoyed it. <3

Melissa:

Hurrah! You having ideas for an oekaki is always a good thing.

Matt has to deal with Mello being over-dramatic on a daily basis, so 'no, you're not' would be his default to my mind. LOL Complacent much, Matt?

*hands over tissues* Hopefully I'll have chance to upload another chapter here today, but if not, it will be Monday.

(I'm in shock. 15 chapters in and there's already 703 hits... :o)

Melissa:

Yes, I can certainly relate to the video game thing. No-one ever interupts when you're at the beginning of something, just when you're in the climatic fight or doing something that can't be interupted. *sigh*

LOL I love how you persist in thinking that Mello isn't a coarse, rude young man. LOL

*roars with laughter* I'm just imagining you getting caught looking up Alligator nipple clamps for reference. Ermm... awww, I was reading literature and.... and... :D

MattKun:

I'm still really honoured that you and your girlfriend are RPing based on my stories. Century does sound like he's a Very Naughty Boy in your stories though. *grabs MattKun's Century and drags him out here* Rydychi silffo y Matt? Cachwr! *smacks him* *sends him back to play with MattKun and Mrs MattKun* The Welsh today, filthy minds. *shakes head sorrowfully*

Nine Lives:

LOL Now I have the image of Mello in a shop buying them too. *snort* I'd actually imagined him getting them off the internet, but I like your version better.

Fine, in relation to Mello's view on Hal's perception of him, is very relative.

LMFAO!
Oh god. That made me laugh. I think we're killing him off. We don't need a use for him now. Last thing he's going to do is to kidnap Matt on the stag night and try to kill them both.

As for this lovely new chapter.
Amazing, yet again.
I like the fact that Mello can flip out to extremes, but with one word he's fine.
It's nice to see that he can be loving, with that sense of danger.

Fucking amazing.
I love you, seriously.

You made me cry a few tears.
I love your Mello, he's simply perfect. Moody, scary and over-emotional, but not really bad at heart. He just can't help himself.
Good thing Matt...well, likes it ... But now he needs a new pair of goggles!

Awesome chap, hun!

You just gave me an idea for an oekaki. xD

Anyways, on to the review!

He raced out of the room and into the study opposite. "Matt! I'm having a panic attack!"

"No, you're not."

Said it a thousand times but I LOVE MATT!!!! XD He's so... Matt. "No you're not. Oh wait. Nevermind." I like how no is his default.

"I've used you!"

"Yeah, but I get off on it, so that is especially good."

XDDDDD Again, these two are brilliant!

And I don't know why but the last part of this update just had me choked up! D: These poor babies.

Though I am kind of emo about the debatable Hal/Mello friendship. T_T But I think they'll work it out somehow. -crosses fingers-