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Woo this was unexpected!
Also, Hal's a brave woman! i don't know if, after what they did to her, I would dare to go to their place LOL

Well a freshman in high school would be about 14-15 years old, and a freshman in college would be about 18-19 years old. And it works either way really, since girl normally do get worked up over boys between 14-18. xDD

Now Hal was oohing and ahhhing at their home with a vigor that was delighting Mello. Matt briefly considered telling them to go and get a room, but it was also nice to see Mello not being overtly paranoid for once.

Awwwwww! See, she forgave him! <3 And LOL at Matt! XD "Get a room!"


They dated from 1851.

Ooooh! Aaaaah! xD heehee <333


"How have you missed me? You've spent most of the time I've been away camped inside Winchester Cathedral talking to me via messenger and text messages." Matt was nontheless touched. He wondered if he should be ashamed of himself. Mello was transparently and blatantly flirting with him and yet he was responding to it precisely as Mello would have him do. "You made me get binoculars so I could see you blow me a goodnight kiss. That's hardly being apart."

These two are so cute! Wittle Mihael is so in love with his Matty~

"What to see my pigsty? I'll warn you in advance it's a mess. It's the only room I don't have a perfectionist picking up after me in."

Poor Matt! XD I can just see Mello following Matt around with a vacuum cleaner! Hehehe~~!!

Holy crap. I dunno if this is just my computer, but I think it keeps chopping my reviews in half. D: UGH!!! WHY??

"In my defence, it was his idea." Mello shrugged. "But I take joint responsibility. We've been investigating you. I'm sorry."

Matt waved the cigarettes in the air. "And I was down to my last two, so we stopped investigating you."

hahhahahahaha Omg! That Matt! He DOES have the attention span of a flea~

"Where's Tweedledum?"

"He's nipped outside for a cigarette."

*grins at Alice reference*

She had not come close to losing her temper like this since she had been a freshman and Corey Badermann had started flirting with Carl Lewis, despite knowing that Hal had fancied him.

hahhaaha! I LOVE Hal! To freaking death! She hasn’t lost her tempter since high school (college?) And it was over a boy! Hehe

"There's a 5% probability that this is dodgy as fuck."

"When Near says things have a low probability, what he actually means is that it's almost certainly true."

"Oh!" Mello straightened again and wandered around to the bonnet. "So he makes the percentages up as well. Interesting."

It’s true! XDD And that makes it all the more funny! Haha I love it!

Melissa: Yes, but Matt's got away with it. Now he can say 'volim te' and Mello's happy... ish... while Matt doesn't have to think about what he's saying. As for the bed thing, you just highlighted a typo, that should be 'loll about in' not 'loll apart in'. LOL Testing Hal's loyalties, you reckon? Mmmm... But what if Matt has just had enough of being Mello's punchbag?

Nine Lives: LOL You and Melissa both read it the same way. Poor Matty, no-one's ever going to take him seriously, even when he hasn't a square inch of unbattered skin on his body. *shakes head* What can he do?

I don't know. I guess if Matt was tired of being punched and beaten, he'd try to run away on hiw own, abd wouldn't asl Hal for help. Running to the House to cry Hal about how mean Mello is doesn't seem like the kind of thing you'd make Matt do. I may be wrong...
Also, it would mean that you want to give this series an end where they're not together, and that's very sad T___T

Hahah well, dunno if she was your friend before, Mello, but sure she won't be anymore XD
And yeah, Matt deserves an Oscar. I feel a bit sad for Hal, poor woman is always being tricked by these two, but she deserves it a bit, because of what she did in canon to Matt >.<
I didn't know Hal was taller than Mello o.o woah she's probably the taller woman in the series. Searching about Hal, I found some silly theories, like Mello and Hal being siblings (WTF) or Hal being Linda XD

*grin* When I do the author's note at the end, I'll be bigging up a team of MxM Catholic advisors, who are sitting in a LJ community thinking up Mello's take on whatever Matt could throw at him. One of them explained something to me as 'stfu I iz God', so I ran with it. 8D

Yay! You got the 'shiny, pretty' reference!

Ooops, I really ought to look at Matt's grammar, hadn't I? *snigger*

Mmmm... who knows about Ms Bullook? Mmmm...

Matt! go and cuddle with Mello!
LOL i'm very clingy in bed. I mean, i love to cuddle and fall asleep like that, to the point of being annoying XD but it's probably the best thing in life.
You are fucking beautiful, Matty. Especially when you're naked, tied down and bleeding, as opposed to giving me lip.
That was mean, Mello! anyway, Matt with a black eye is damn hot, i missed it too.
Nice chap, very heart-warming.

p.s.: you can't use the "ñ" letter?

Thank you! *snog* I couldn't copy it. I looked up what I wanted to say on a Spanish language site, on the basis that you'd tell me if it was wrong. I saw niño, but the word was in php and wouldn't let me copy it. I haven't got ñ on my keyboard, no. Ta for that!