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for The Mello Code

by DeathNoteFangirl

schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful ending! And yay for Deontic! Love that girl from some very odd reason. XD Melissa and I were laughing about what if you had made Fenian do it instead of Deontic, we came to this conclusion, Fenian = rocks>Mello, Matt, and Near. XD Hmm... what else? I don't know, all I know is that I love how it ended. ^__^
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Should be in bed already but wanted to read the ending of this story today :)
Well, it seems they have already found some kind of peace of mind, at least about Kira and L and the code. I wasn't expecting Mello and Matt to actually go to the event, specially since in those last chapters they seem to be more into the "hey, I do thing in my own way" style. But it's all good, they deserved the medals and prizes and love.

From sunny Spain.... LOL well, if Matt's from Basque country, that place is hardly sunny. It like here where I live, known for being rainy and cloudy, but I guess I can't erase that wrong idea from a English mind >.< *facepalm*

This was a great fic, as the rest of the series, and I'm happy for you to recive the praise that you deserve and all those hits! *hugs*
person tdorian
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, happy birhtday Mello.I hope Mello will have another case soon.Something big.Otherwise there is only the two of thjem...and there is so much intensity, insanity...between thme that i'm sometimes worried they might just combust because of this incredible fire between them.MORE.Aida
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED the part about Lamond sleeping with Kira! Oh my GOD! I laughed so hard!

"Get up by the headboard and stop making words up." Mello looked pensive for a couple of seconds. "Does the English language have the word 'delect'? I know it has 'delectable'."

"Fuck knows, I'm Spanish. Are you seducing me or having an English lesson?" Matt moved on up until his back was against the headboard.


Best. Retort. Ever. "Fuck knows, I'm Spanish."

And sexy as fuck sex scene! Ohoho! I love how perverted these two are! Now if you excuse me, I have another chapter to read! hehe
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hal changed tacks. "Are you coming to our event? I put the invitation in the envelope and, before you tell me that you and Matt are busy, let me remind you that I know the pair of you and you have no social life. I will find it very hard to believe that you have a prior engagement. I'll put you both down as a 'yes' then?"

"Tell me how you arranged the doctorate, Hal."

There was a clack-clicking. "Can you hear me typing, Mello? That's me entering you and Matt as confirmed."

"We're not c..." Mello had noticed an e-mail on the laptop in front of him. "One moment please, Hal." He reached down and pulled the machine onto his lap. It was from the Polish embassy in Sofia. He read it quickly. "Hal, I've had an e-mail. In Polish."

"Spam?"

"A case."

"Do you need me to arrange a translator?"

Mello blinked. "I'm fluent in Polish, bitch."


BEST FUCKING PART OF THE WHOLE CHAPTER. xDDDDDD I love Hal. "Hear that? It's me typing that you'll be there." And Mello, "I'm fluent, bitch." I'm laughing so hard! I love these two! xDDDDD And Matt, who I also adore the pants off of, and his little "You code is greater than L" at the end. AWWWWWWWW. TOO CUTE FOR WORDS. Loved it! Love love love it. Moar plz? :D
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was suppused to be studying but I spotted a new chap and couldn't help it. Damn you and your awewsome fics!:P

Matt and the bottle was very punk XD

oh and i just read your answer to the previous reviews, and no, i wasn't really expecting Mello to fuck Matt in the chapel, but I was so hyper and excited when read it that I wasn't able to leave a proper comment XD
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As I told Saigo, I love Matt. He drinks on his way to break into a church. xDDD I can just imagine him trailing behind Mello, swigging alcohol. This chapter made me smile like... uber loads!! hehehe These boys are just... kick ass! I love Mello's mind!
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nine Lives:

Yes, poor Mello is going through the mill at the moment. Poor darling. *laughs* No, I think Matt's Catholic class days are over. Even he didn't think it would cause that much fuss. -.-

Thank you for your kind words re my Matt. :D You were expecting Mello to do that or you weren't? His ideas do tend to come from left field.

Melissa:

*grins* Matt was probably killing himself laughing inside at the time too. LOL

Ooooh! Yes, it was Peter! *points* Let's lynch him.

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. :D

Aida:

It was lovely to see you on MangaBullet. :D

Merci. Mello is such a pleasure to write at times. Just don't tell him that he's a sin. You know what he's like. We'd never hear the end of it. -.- I'm glad that the religious aspect is working. I've got a great team of advisors to whom I can turn on matters of Catholic theology. They've been brilliant in this story. :D

Coloured Red:

It was a bit of a rollercoaster ride, wasn't it? That Mello, he's just too emotional. *sighs* LOL And yep, had him right in the Chapel. Looks to me like that Mary is quite open-minded on these things. She seems like a dude to me.

Aruslym:

I'm familiar with the book/film, so yes, that was what I had in mind. However, I think that if Mello was to ever read such things, it would be 'Holy Blood, Holy Grail'. That's the one that Dan Brown nicked all his ideas from. It would have the touch of academia that would stop Mello just throwing it up the wall. LOL

Glad that you're all enjoying it and thank you all for reading my stories.

person tdorian
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Matty literally cracked me up ! But seriously he won't spend a day without internet ??? LOL I think they should play doctors now...*wink,wink* Aida
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! I love this chapter! AWWHHH! SO CUUUUUUUTE! These two are so adorable! And I loved the end! Oh Mello would have had a cow if he knew Matt was a doctor and he wasn't! hahahaha Oh my goodness, these two are cute.

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