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Nine Lives:

You're safe. No MelloxNear here. :p

Hal is really missing a trick there. I mean, imagine the hits on YouTube if she let them and filmed it. *dirty, old woman leer*

Matt wasn't at all sure what Mello was going to do with the bag. It looked very sinister to his mind.

Yay! I'm teaching you new English words. Surprisingly they aren't swearwords this time. LOL I can picture that 'Love me, I'm Matt' grin so well. *grin*

Melissa:

Hal does pwn. :D Unfortunately, she doesn't appear to do porn. :(

I thought you'd like the fluffy chapter. That sounds like an insult, but it's not meant to be. LOL

I love it when you quote things. I end up laughing too. *chuckle* I'm safe in my house. I'm not the only one with dark hair.

Coloured Red:

Awww! Thank you for your comments. :D I've gone all shivery grinny here, which I needed. I was just playing Super Mario Brothers. I got Mario all the way to Bowser Jr, in the Tower. He was Fire Mario, with a fire flower in reserve, AND I had five coins. I went to make a jump and accidentally hit the 'off' button instead of the 'up' button. -.- So yes, noticing that I had comments, then reading what you had to say cheered me up no end. Thank you.

And you made me giggle with what you quoted. It's so wrong, laughing at your own stuff. LOL

Aida:

Yay! You've caught up. There's a picture of the 4th generation Wammy's House alumni here: http://www.mangabullet.com/visit/MRS-Jeevas if you wanted something to look at while waiting years for me to update. Sorry about that. Yule happened. I'm getting round to the remaining chapters now though. *happy smile*

Thank you so much for your kind words. See above why I needed cheering up right now and you did it. Thank you.

I feel a bit sad, dunno. Somehow...Mello seems to be defeated and abandoned ;_;
But yeah, Lauren is a good girl, and working for Mello is not the kind of job everybody can do.

hahaha OMG this chap was made of awesome! even if i had to search for the meaning of woebegotten XD

Lovely and amusing XD Mello whining and wanking was so IC XD and the "look, I'm Matt, love me" grin is soooo true <3

When you told me "There's all ready 32 chapters...!" I had forgotten that I had only read 31. So I rushed to see the new chapter. Loved it of course! Injured!Mello is one of my faves, because it's so rare. hehe (Other than the obvious scarring incident of course... xD)

Matt wondered how this had played out when Mello had been in the Mafia. He imagined thugs returning to the hideout, dripping blood and testosterone, reporting back on how they'd just wiped out four generations of the same family; and Mello standing there, brutally not saying a word, just hoovering until everyone dropped what they were killing in order to help.

Best. Mental. Image. Ever.

Mello had been standing glaring at him. Now he rasped out with icy pointedness. "The blockage is already out and is in the bath tub. It was a ball of red hair. The thread on the trap is fucked. It fell off in my hand."

xDDDD I had to laugh, because this happens at my house all the time. Hair blocks up the sink, the tub, and back when we had one, the pool. xDDDDDD And I couldn't really blame anyone else for it, because the hair was always red, and I live in a completely brunet(te) family. -.-

"Yeah, I know. Can you tell me your name?"

"... wanker!"

"Yes. Any other names?"

And last but not least... I love Matt! xD

Awww so romantic and fluffy.

Matt thought Mello was going to axphysiate himself with the bag??

Holy crap! This chapter was too cute for words!! Sooooo romantic and cute and awh!! I loved it to death! Oh Mello and his need for cuddles! SOOO FREAKING CUTE!! -fangirl squeals- I'll shut up now. xD

Melissa:

To me there's something fascinating about blond jokes around Mello. It fits into that same category of throwing coins onto the backs of crocodiles or taunting snakes with sticks. It's cruel, but also potentially fatally dangerous. Matt's done it only twice in the whole series and I love him for both of them.

Yes, I was referring to the belt incident. :D

Even as I was writing it, I didn't know if there really was a policeman. I was in Mello's head going, 'OMG, is there?' Matt's a git.

I'm sure that Matt could find things to occupy his time. :p Mello was asking directions so that CS Doughty wouldn't know that he already knew where it was. If he'd gone straight there, she might have deduced that he was familiar with the place. Those were his thought processes anyway.

I think that the cutting off of reviews happens when we use certain smilies. This site is coded with php, so some smilies actually look like code. As a matter of interest, had you written the less than three, loveheart symbol at the point where it cut off? I think that the site reads that as an open tab, so is looking for the close tab and thus fails to show the rest of the comment.

*grin* I do love trying to fill the plot-holes in the original. There is a definite change of opinion on the part of Near as to what L was like. The L he describes whilst in the Yellow Box is fundamentally different to the L described in the one-shot. The latter takes place three years later, so what was in the interim? It occurred to me that 'Another Note' actually contains the missing information which might cause Near to change his opinion in that way. Woot!

Mello can be so uncouth at times. -.-

Nine Lives:

*grin* Matt just wanted to thrash out the Mello Code, while Mello was trying to head him off at the pass by discussing things that Matt doesn't want to. Matt just wants to have the sex, not analyse it. LOL

Don't fret, I can't see Mello and Near ever having sex in my series. I have received a request for it though on DA. I can't even imagine how I'd go there. 0.o

Matt in biking leathers. This is where your visual mind kicks in over my wordform mind. I bet you can actually picture what he looks like, can't you? I have to keep imagining Mello with Matt's head on top and then hope for the best. *grin*

Thank you all for reading this.

Aish I really hope you're not finding the inspiratin to write that MxN! It'd break my heart if you change Matt for Near O____O

Matt's a genious. He always knows how to deal with Mello when he's all out of control and freacking the hell out of everyone. The blonde should be happy to have him with him.

And hahhaaha Hal don't want them to do it on her desk! that's was priceless!

May I direct you to the best part:


Though realistically they had known that Hal was watching them, the fact wasn't brought home until running footsteps sounded in the reception area now. Hal knocked once before bursting in. "Off my desk!"

*dies* I LOVE HAL. TO DEATH. Even if Matt sees being nice to her as being a chore. If Matt didn't exist, MxH would probably be my favorite pairing. XD But the redhead exists, sooooo... MxM foreva!

And my thoughts exactly on the smiley thing. And I was trying to figure out which one it was because I use so many I forget. But I think you're right about the less than three. It would look like unfinished code. I don't know why it kills everything after it. xD But I can see the problem now. x)

This chapter was brillant.
I love to see Mello so stressed LOL
And I love Mello and Near interacting (but just as rivals, ok?)
Also, I want to see Matt wearing Mello's biking leathers!