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aww that was cute and funny.
This may be a special day in their lives. They're OUTSIDE! Matt's not smoking for at least ...how long? two hours? Mello's wearing a non-skin-tigh shirt. Woah!

There's 2 different teams in Manchester, right? ( i don't know a thing about footbal...)

WEEEEEEEEEEE
CHAPTERRRRRRRR

Not too fond of football but what the hell.
I'd be like Matt, playing my DS and then crying when the battery ran out. xD

Uhm uhm... Could I be cheeky and ask if you could read my new fic?
-Hides-

Enjoyed this chapter. Just a quick question. What are you trying to say here.
"Usarte hasta que grites de placer y te corras por toda la fina decoración de este hotel tan elegante.""
It doesn't make sense to me. Mainly the part after 'and', he wants Matt to run away for all the fine decorations of the hotel? Thats how I understood it and it makes no sense to what else had been said.

hahaah!!

Yeah, he is. Except he was lying to save Mello's behind. xD
And, homg. They should do that.

Loved this chapter.
Twas.... hot.

Nine Lives:

I recently re-read 'Maskerade' by Terry Pratchett, which led to watching 'The Phantom of the Opera' film. There's only so far you can go before you can't help but notice that half of Erik's face is scarred and... *grins* I've been planning this for weeks! I didn't know then it would be a sex scene, but somewhere around 'Point of No Return', it settled in my head and I had to write it. Originally it was going to be a Mello angst scene, but the Mello in my head rebelled and told me he's over it now.

Melissa:

Well, Mello IS pretty. I keep trying to call him handsome or even beautiful and that insidious word 'pretty' floats back. As for the references, there aren't that many and most of those are what everyone knows via osmosis. I was careful to keep them mostly around 'The Phantom of the Opera' song alone, as that's the one that Nightwish covered. I figured Mello would have a version that's heavy metal.

Glad you liked it.

Aruslym:

If Mello is Erik, I doubt anyone would dare to be Raoul. I think they'd very quickly discover that they aren't so much rescuing 'Christine' from a ghost, but a Mafioso in full roar. *grin*

MattKun:

Yes, my Matt does that. In fact, he does it with aplomb in the chapter as I've just uploaded. :p

Ooh.
I liked this ep- Wait what am I saying? Episode?
I mean chapter. I liked the chapter. -Nods-

I hope they don't die in this fic. Heh.

Keep it up.
And thank you for today.
Greatly appreciated.

How do you think it makes me feel when you act like you're unworthy to lick the soles of my boots?"

"Horny?"

-dies of laughter- Oh sweet God. Well. Matt certainly knows Mello well.

"I could at least take on your random internet German bloke at the Mah Jong. I'm assuming you won the last round."

Of course Mello won. He's a genius!

"Yes." He breathed. "I've beaten him three times in a row in fact."

See?

"You see!" Matt beamed. "Your life isn't a total failure!"

And Matt certainly makes it better. XD You don't suck at online games, Mello! There's always that! hehe

"Matt, tell me that you didn't contact the Spanish government to tell them what happened to you."

Matt rolled his eyes. "I won't dignify that with a response."

hahahahhahaha Oh Matt! The fact Mello even suspects you is silly, but I don't know. I can just see Matt refusing to answer. x3

Matt blinked. "Huh?"

Hal tutted. "Matt, why is it that I always have to resist the urge to speak slowly and loudly with you? Please just give me some ideas. He's a very difficult man to buy for."

For one, MAJOR LOL at slowly and loudly. XD I love Hal. For two, OMG YAYYYYYYY! She wants to buy Mello a birthday gift! Love love love love!!! It makes me super happy! Oh I love Halle! hehe

"Put it this way, I'm shagging Mello. I'm shagging the prettiest person to come out of Wammy's and that includes the girls. Do you think I'd rather be looking at his face or a lump of dried paper? And incidentally, the quotes are totally lost on me. I've never seen the play."

haha I've never seen the Phantom of the Opera either. So yes I fail with references. haha And I love Matt calling Mello pretty. Because that man is gorgeous! hehe

LOVED the update. Oh you and your talent for writing kinky sex! Love love!

Amazing! Just one question, though - if Mello is Erik and Matt is Christine, who's Raoul?

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