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for The Mello Code

by DeathNoteFangirl

schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nine Lives:

I wish he'd wear his glasses more too. You know how, when you're working with these people, you end up with miniature versions of them directing their own storylines? Well, every time I try to put Matt in glasses, there's such an uproar. It's not even the vanity. He can't hide behind glasses like he can his goggles. :(

Yes, Matt just dislikes people per se, except Mello. LOL

Melissa:

*grin* I would really hate to be working somewhere when Mello wanted something from me. :D And yes, fantasies about killing him. Young love...

OMG! A sexual fantasy that's better than the aardvarks?! I'm so proud. *grin* I love your quotes. They make me well proud of my writing. I'm glad you're still enjoying my stories. <3

Mattkun:

Ah! I see on the mugging. Lying git in your RP as well as in my story. LOL

Hopefully MangaBullet will one day provide chat-rooms too.

It is cool writing a Matt flip out after a million Mello ones. :D

Aida:

Oh Wow! How lovely of you to go to such trouble just to comment here! Merci beaucoup. :D I'm really glad that you're enjoying the stories. I hope you enjoy Watari Pt 1. {{{hugs}}}
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Erk, it randomly ate my responses to Mattkun and Aida! -.- I'll write them again.)

Mattkun:

Hopefully one day MangaBullet will provide us with chat rooms too and we'll party in them.

I see what you mean on the mugging. So Matt's a lying git in your RP as well as my stories then? LOL

It was fun writing Matt flipping out. It's usually Mello, so it made a nice change.

Aida:

Oh wow! How lovely of you to go to such trouble just to comment on my stories. Merci beaucoup! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Thank you for your kind words and I'm glad that you're enjoying the stories. I hope that you enjoy 'Watari Pt 1' too. :D
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha omg that's creative sex, Mel!
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it's nice to see Matt flip out once in a while.

<33

Excellent as always.
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The ending to this was amazing. XD Just utterly amazing. Probably the best ending conversation of a chapter I've ever read. AND NOW TIME TO QUOTE THINGS!

"Have you never worked out the extreme unlikelihood of our planet being created? Or pondered on the things that make no sense at all?"

"Like standing in the freezing cold when there's a house right there with heating in it?"


I love you Matt. I love you so much. You and your wit. XD


"The fridge has never given me a blow-job." Matt replied, emerging from the pantry again.

BWA HA HA HA! XD The mental image alone is the best thing in the world. XDD I just can't get over it. It's almost as good as the aardvarks.

Matt sighed. "There are holes you could drive a Sherpa tank through in your hypothesis, but congratulations. You've headed me off at the pass. By aggressively attacking science, you've taught me the error of my ways in attacking Catholicism. I've learned that if I do that again, I will be bored stupid in my own kitchen by a five foot six collection of dust particles. Have we got any nice bread to go with the casserole? I know there's sliced, but I prefer chunky."

What's there to say? This is the best paragraph ever! Matt's witty banter makes my life. Seriously.

"Is Satan a redhead?" Mello stirred his casserole with his spoon. "In my case, yes. Satan is a redhead. Fucking gorgeous, sexy, smartass redhead, who leads me into temptation on a regular basis."

"I'm quite proud of that."


I love these two. I love them to death. I'd say they need to get married, but they already did. -fangirl swoon-
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeeeeee.
Another chapterrrrrrrrr.


Love it. Love you. Love this site.
Most of the time. >.>

Keep it uppp.

And you guys seriously need to get MSN or Yahoo. So I can talk to you all. ^^
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"You told them that you got mugged."

Ah.
No, I meant this part.

I hadn't even read this chapter and I'd made my Matt tell Watari that he'd been mugged by Century to keep Mello safe. Cause Mello had beaten him up, really badly after hearing a recording from Century.
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nine Lives:

I think that Matt takes a very pragmatic view of the five stitches. The goggles, however, are a very different matter.

MattKun:

Yay! Glad you're loving it. Yes, I did think about how similarly our minds are running, when you said that your RPed Matt was in the infirmary.

Melissa:

LOL Inorite? I wear contact lenses normally, but occasionally I have my glasses on and I'm right there with you. Glad you're enjoying the chapter. 8D
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So Matt's not pissed anymore now that he has his goggles back? (it's hald a pity, cause I think he'd look cute with glasses too)
And I think Matt dislikes Lauren....well, Matt dislikes everybody. Except Mello. It makes him even more lovely XD
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe Matt is so jealous! He's so cute! And Mello is quite the charmer, I must say! Breaking all the girls' hearts!! XD haha

For all of her professionalism, she really wasn't paid enough to deal with Mello.

HAHAHAHA! XD That sentence is just TOO great! The mental image...!

He figured that his husband might be too fast to submit to a bullet in the head, but maybe might fall for eating chocolate laced with arsenic.

And that mental image is even better! XDDDD I can just see Mello lounging on the chair eating chocolate then falling over! xDDD haha Though knowing him, I think he'd somehow realize his dear chocolate was messed with. XDDDD I love these two.

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