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for The Path of Sacrifice

by LittleBlackKitten

person Mizuru007
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FFFFFF I WANTED TO KILL THE SECRETARY SO BADLY. I can just see her filing her nails, popping her gum, and talking in a nasally New York accent. UGH.

Stupid bitch aside, I've learned to love George. Angel's a big fan of harem punishments, isn't she? I hope it doesn't come back to bite her in the butt.

Also, Gary Oak had better make the match interesting. If I see a "Moonlight flips the fuck out and tries to kill Gary" moment, I will applaud and laugh.
For hours. :D
person mizuru007
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Say hello to a new faaaan~
First off, I thank you for the MewtwoxAngel scene. This MAAAY sound weird, but ever since the first Pokemon movie came out, I thought he was hot, in a pokemon sorta way. So's Lucario...ANYWAY, thank you! :D
Next, I love your writing style. Rather, I love how there's a plot and NOT just a bunch of sex. xP Also, it's well-written and gramatically sound!

And lastly, I have a super request for a future chapter: Have Moonlight TRY something funny with Angel, but it not work. ...and human/pokemon hybrid baby will be born soon in all of its awesomeness, yes? :D

KEEP WRITING!
person Hinorashi
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't let this story die. D:
person Apolla
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wooo it's gotten really dark.. but then the capture.. I enjoyed this little arc. Keep it up :)
~Sol~
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heya let me just say that when I first started reading I didn't think it would hold my attention to long. But I'm glad im wrong it really is a good story and the best pokemon fic I read in a while. That and its updated pretty daily as well.

Hope you do keep up the good work I look forward to seeing what Angel and Gary get into next.
person Hinorashi
schedule January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I wonder what Gary will think...
person RAW19
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Indeed? I guess you still need more time to cool off. Do keep me posted.

Angel...Amelio...Anarchy. An apparent affinity for the alphabet letter 'A'. An awe-inspiring acquaintance, especially as i'm just noticing after all this time. Not annoying though. All in all, any can see the story getting deeper as you accelerate. Battles also appear more accurate and are more awe-inspiring and less aggravating. Astounding really. I adhere to your accumulating skills and aspire to view another awesome chapter in this account.

Yes, by the way, i would prefer the entire challenge.
person Apolla(onep)
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha Heya Kitten! Great chapter, as per usual. And chapter 19 was good as well. This story has a really good plot line. I'll admit that a little more adult content might be nice, but even saying that, if it were to disrupt the plot then the lemon could be saved for later.
~Sol~
person RAW19
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XDDDD Ready to talk to me yet?

Most interesting. Mewtwo is actually helping her out in her gym battles. Like the leaders would stand a chance against him. Now another body dead with a hint of Darkrai.....yes, most interesting. I look forward to it.
person RAW19
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you need to calm down, lady!

Anyways, this was another interesting and at some point hilarious chapter. It was also quite emotional. Had i been any more drawn into it i might have cried. That's actually happened before.

I look forward to another fun chapter.

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