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for The Path of Sacrifice

by LittleBlackKitten

person Hinorashi
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Needs more Angel x Pokemon.
person RAW19
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read chapter 18. No problems to report. It was funny as hell.
person Apolla
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Umm what can I say? You've explained the oddity of Angel's Shinies, the ease of her control over Anarchy,and gave her a pretty epic background all in a few moment's of an image... The very idea of Angel havng the soul of Mew.. Amazing.. And the story of her father? This is shaping up to be one of the best fic's I've read! Seriously. Keep it up, and thank you for writing.
~Sol~
person Apolla
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice :D Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
~Sol~
person Apolla
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hiya :D First I wanna tell you, that from what I've read so far... ok fine! I read al l15 chapters and am only commenting now... but is it so wrong to be entirely engrossed in the story? haha. I was wondering if you could add me to msn... my email is ApollaPhoebePlatinum@googlemail.com thanks p.s. Loved it ;o
person RAW19
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O Aerodactyl!?!?!? Where'd that come from?!!?!?

*ahem* Another interesting chapter. I quite liked the battle.
person RAW19
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot Diggity Damn!!!

The death was really depressing, but the rest was funny as hell!

- "but the whole idea of Giovanni owning her wasn't exactly an idea that spoke of kittens and flowers"

OMG that cracked me up! Then she actually won! Then she caught another shiny! I've never done such! I find myself eagerly awaiting more!! XD
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Giovanni on the scene! Wow, he must be up to something pretty sinister there. I find it most peculiar that he got every Gym Leader that Angel's beat so far. Sheer luck on her end or is there more to this? Curse this cliffhanger. XD
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do have MSN, but I'm slightly careful about posting it in places like AFF since I also use that address for my public conversations with the non-perverted world XD . (Which doesn't know I hang out here, which is just fine.) If you can think of a way to share it outside of the review space, I prolly won't mind giving it to you. ^_^

Also, no such thing as too much information, lass. >D It's always 'fun' to... get to know the writer behind the story a little better. *chuckles darkly* So inform away. XD My point still stands, though. Even if Angel has what you call a voracious sexual appetite, there was no trace of it previously which still made her willingness seem a little sudden in the greater context of the story. I ain't got no problem with the appetite in itself, though, haha. On the contrary ;]
person Cerebrate_Fate
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Theres only one thing I hate more than cliffhangers. ONE THING!!! Authors that don't update. Okay maybe two things. (Authors that write cliffhangers)

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